Reviews for Unintended
O. Puspa .O chapter 64 . 7/31/2019
Aaaaaakkk this is sooo cute. I'm glad that the Kise-Aomine conflicts weren't so frustrating. I'm glad that they managed to trust each other and tell everything that happened. Communication is very very very important in a relationship so I'm glad that they were open to each other.

But (this is from my personal opinion so forgive me), I didn't see canon!Aomine & canon!Kise in your Aomine in Kise. Their personalities are kinda different. I dunno, I just can't imagine it in my head. Or is it because the mpreg thing? I'm not sure. I always have soft spot for realistic fanfics, so I'd like it if the characters' personalities match with the canon characters. But this is my subjective opinion, so it doesn't affect the story quality. It's just about preference.

Anywaaaay, thank you for writing this fanfic. I'm new to the fandom, and have a lot of fanfics to read lol. I'm gonna check your other story if you have more hehe
sakuraShuurei chapter 32 . 5/28/2018
I’m at halfway mark and absolutely loving the story!
Had never really made it this far with Mpreg fic but this is really awesome. Thanks!
sakuraShuurei chapter 9 . 5/27/2018
I literally “Pfft” when I read Souichiro Tatsumi
Guest chapter 40 . 11/6/2017
That guy is soooo good at giving realistic job preview
notapieceofcake chapter 64 . 3/13/2017
FUCKING HELL I AM SO EMOTIOBAL RN OK AND MY FEELS ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE AND I'M SO HAPPY D,: it's like... such a beautiful jouney and personally I felt liek a part of it even though i fell off the grid after chapter 50 xD such a loser i ammm! Damnnnn! My feeelsss!
notapieceofcake chapter 63 . 3/13/2017
...! I nearly had a duckibg heart attack through the birthing scene! Thank goodness kagami and kuroko had gone to see the match xD aLsooo! HOORAY FOR THE SECCESSFUL BIRTH!... AND FOR EMIKO BEING...so wonderful D: DID I READ ALL THAT RIGHT?
notapieceofcake chapter 62 . 3/13/2017
I am hyperventilating! The baby ahower and kise's shoot were AMAZING! then aomine's game was going awesome and emiko came and i was all warm and fuzzy but then kise stARTED GETTING CONTRACTIONS AND FUCK HIS WATER BROKE WILL THEY GET TO THE HOSPITAL IN TIME OMFG WHATTTTT
notapieceofcake chapter 61 . 3/12/2017
AÀHHH! Maki is sch a sweetie piee! But damnnnn! ...their teiko story was super dramatic O.O !... guhhhh. I really wanna visit that coffee shop they met at D: im just glad that maki is apprently more reasonable now and didnt wamma bite aomine"s head off xD
notapieceofcake chapter 60 . 3/12/2017
OHMYGODDD! ...so shima had the operation he needed? Goshhh! I'm so worried! I waant that surprozed by aomine's nughtmare tbh x3 i realized a couple lines in yhat it was a nightmare. Nontheless! It was creepyyyyy! Goshhhh! Momoi and Ando are soooo cuuuteeee! I wanted to screammmm! Sguwvxivwiev! I'm surprized kise didnt react more strongly! I would have been terrified and beyond comforting! XD those other moms and couples were sweet. I'm jut glad they have some positive support!...Maki though! I hope she's nowhere near as bitchy as her mom D:
notapieceofcake chapter 59 . 3/11/2017
I THINK ILL CRY THE ENDING WAS SO FLUFFY AND SWEET OMFG HOLD MEEE! kagami's little chat with kise was adorableee! his dorkiness is so genuine it's adorableee! i'm also suuuper glad kise is finally home! :))
notapieceofcake chapter 58 . 3/11/2017
Afjdklnhffgi! Ahhhh! It was so sweet of Emiko to come despite her argument with Daikiiii! I love how she is finally coming around! Ahhh i'm so glad Kise still has fans! But I really hope that sawada doesnt get off easy! Alsooo kise's lil group of friends probably owes poor mibuchi a thanka? X3
notapieceofcake chapter 57 . 3/11/2017
My fees! Ando's stpry had me on alert! His lil brther is adorableeee!...what happened to him? I am so curious! Alsoooo! EMIKO COMFORTIKG KISE AND TWLLING HIM NONE OF IT WAS HIS FAULT-! I NEARLY CHOKED! gahhh. This is so niceee D: BUT i'm suddenly so stressed aboit what shiro said! What if those arseholes actually do that?! Just to hold heirr power and to make sure aomine's future is tarnished forever D:
notapieceofcake chapter 56 . 3/11/2017
Ugh. It's so fucking pathetic that Sawada was so terrified when he himself was helpless with a possible, not even CONFIRMED mind you, threat to his own life; while on the other hand he takes so much pleasure exploiting others trust and destroying them. Fucker ha actually planned to KILL Shima and his baby! God damned psycho! Goddd! I'm just so glad Kise and his baby are safe! ...and! I think my heart broke a little when Aine cried! OUR POOR BABY! Thank goodness Emiko actually loves her son! Alsooo! KAGAMI AND KUROKO GOD DAMN IT OF THEY HADN BEEN THERE THAT DAY-!
notapieceofcake chapter 55 . 3/11/2017
POOR MIBUSHI OHMUGOD THAT FUCKING SAWADAAAA! GOD DDAMN IT WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN NOW?! WHO WILL CUSHION KISE?!
notapieceofcake chapter 54 . 3/10/2017
Aaaajjfdclkjgfszk! Like-! This so warmed my heart- despite emiko being stood up by her shitty friends QAQ kise gETTING A JOB OFFER- KISE MEETING NEW AND RELATABLE MEMBERS, ume's adorable and talented brother; kise and emiko's sweet surprize lunch date and kise's father saying yess ;;A;;
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