nice

i would rather that cross not be dead, but good fic

so allen isn't an exorcist?
This story is well written but really confusing
really like the story though

so allen isn't an exorcist?
This story is well written but really confusing

So when will u continue it close but not that close to a 2 years mark and this might be a hard part to continue so hope you make it

Haha I loved the short scene of Allen cross-dressing! And the battle between Tyki and Allen too. On another note however, I'm not really sure what to say about this fic. I like it, but at the same time.. I'm not sure, really. But! It is definitely intriguing. I do hope that you write more!

...Was that Cross being somewhat considerate..?! The world is ending, I'm sure of it. Damn.. I never got around to finish my fanfics either. -sighs ruefully-

This put simply is amazing

i love all of your dgm fics but this has to be one of my favourites. it's so good and i'm really glad anita didn't die in it because i love her. and i always love how you characterize allen in your fics. i just love everything about this fic? lulubell was great. hope you eventually update this sometime :))

Very funny and reflection fanfiction... thank you for writting this.

What an interesting writing style!

For some reason, it feels like it could just end right here. But then the other part of me is begging for more chapters.
So, I guess, could you please update if you have the time and inspiration?

The first thing that came to mind when the Earl asked Allen if he hated him was Cross' words to Allen on the Ark, to not fight the Earl with hatred, and given Allen's situation a compromise with the Earl seems very logical. Apocryphos seriously creeps me out and it also makes me wonder yet again about the true nature of Innocence, if everyone who wields it will end up taken over by it in the end and end up like him. Makes you wonder just who the bad guys really are.

Ah, and the story continues. I find it so very interesting what you spin on the -man plot. Allen, the Fourteenth, the messed up Noah family, the Order and the messed up innocence and the messed up psyche of Allen. It is particularly interesting about in this fic that Allen doesn't hate Nea or fight him with all his might. The consideration he takes concerning him in fact is a counterpoint to canon and it makes me wonder how much of Allen the First has either seeped into his fractured state of mind or what makes him think like that otherwise. The conversation with the Earl was as interesting as usual, too. I wonder what makes the Earl give the Fourteenth such special treatment. Is it because he in a family that happened to be thousands of years old, he is the first that rebelled and killed a good number and tried to killed him too? Or just because the Fourteenth wasn't supposed to exist?
Great new chapter. :) I'm looking forward to more.

... Wow. Just wow. I suddenly decide to take the jump and read one of your DGM fics, and I am utterly amazed at how well you've written this fic. Particularly how different decisions and attitudes during DGM would have changed how things went. I'm going to be looking forward to reading more!