Love this! Hated Hidden World, and prefer Hiccup with Merida and Astrid with Heather. This is cannon to me! ;)

I miss this ship so much. Then again I miss the whole "Rise of the Brave Tangled Dragons" phase and the ships involved with that. Ahh, nostalgia...
Been rereading a lot of related stories and came across this again. Just adore your writing and how in character everything feels. I wish you'd write more with mericcup, because I adore how you write them!

NOPE

I'm just 10, this is-yeah...it's rated m right? Rated m is 18 and up...so...luckily, there's no lemon. I hate lemon. I'm more of a kristanna fanfiction person, but the ones I read aren't rated m...,well, sometimes. Anywho, GREAT job! I might be doing fanfics myself as well.

Wow good job

I just have to say I've read this fanfic a few time now, and it's still the best mericcup sexual fanfic I've read. This seems very realistic for the time period. I like the sutal detail of he fact that some would normally watch royally have sex, the first time, to make sure they have sex. I can see hiccups dad saying the thing about only the couple should see and working with Merida mother on that. The character neriousness was spot on. They would totally be nervous the first time having sex. Grade A fanfic

Very nice. I love how you took account of Merida's accent, it really made the story seem more realistic.

I love it! It was great and adorable :D

so fuckin cute loved it

So good. Amazing writing.

I loved it! It was really genuine. I loved the portrayal of the characters' personalities, and culture, and especially of their innocence. The way you depicted the culture and time setting, and how it effected the characters was just amazing. I loved, loved, loved it!

GAH…I am such a Sapp

So hot, love this pairing! Definately would love to read some more - write another please? :D

Lovely :)

BEAUTIFUL! Update update!