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Oookay..shit..*sob*
So..they die after they fucking each other*sob*..instead of become 1 like eclipse since they're sun & moon...*sob*..& then they're reincarnating..*sob*..reborn as akari & kaimei...HUUEEEEEEE T_T*crying louder*

Oh & i think u just left indra & ashura behind lmao*sob*(still crying..)...they're kinda more important to put in the list than sakura & mito(since both of them are like a 3rd wheel)

incredible!~~~~~~~~~~~

FucKING HELL IM ACTUALLY CRYING. This was really fucking sad and i wasn't going to cry but then hashirama in the rain and tobirama and then Naruto and Sasuke at the end aND THEN I COULDN'T STOP THE TEARS AND I WAS CRYING AND TELLING MY FRIEND ABOUT IT AND THEN THE REBORN VERSIONS OF NARUTO AND SASUKE I JUST FUCKING CAN'T ANYMORE OH MY GO D. I just- I can't st OP c rying D'X

OMG! This is so sad, but I loved it! Thank you so much for writing this fic! It's really good!

Dear Goddess, how could I express what I'm feeling right now?! This was so perfect! It made me cry so much! For Gods... I can't even say what this fic just did to me! I just loved it so, so, SO MUCH!

The beginning, the middle, and the end, everything in these was amazing! The feelings of Madara and Hashirama, and Naruto to Sasuke... Was so deep. You really can pass that on the story. And I'm so glad with this!

At the end... I just want to say: thank you. Thank you for this fanfiction. Thank you very much.

I wanted to say more, but my knowledge on english don't let me do that... Sorry, I'm brazilian, its a bit hard to write in english, yet. :/ But, I hope you understand what I feel with this fanfiction! 3
Congratulations for the lovely moment of this fic! 3

THIS IS AMAZING ! SERIOUSLY PEOPLE WHY THIS FANFIC ONLY HAVE 15 REVIEWS?

YES YES Thank you for this awesome story. Beautiful! It's rare to have so many emotions so claery in a story.

OMG I'm amazed aroused and crying. Such a beautiful chapter. That confession at the end really got to me.

E 'stato davvero ben scritto , mi è piaciuto molto ! Le uniche parti non mi piaceva era il limone , ho sentito che potrebbe essere stato scritto o fuori , fa riferimento , o semplicemente non è accaduto . L'altra parte che mi è piaciuta è stato il finale con le reincarnazioni . Non era davvero speciale, forse si era conclusa con Hinata e Sakura di conversazione che sarebbe stato più significativo . A parte queste due cose , è stato perfetto !

This is so full of emotion! It almost made me cry, and I love the authors style too. All around great story!

this was so freakin good! OMG! I loved how you connected the circumstances of hashirama and madara' s tragedy to naruto and sasuke's reunion. I dont even know what to say it was just that good.

I loved it, thank you for writing :)

the story was amazing and i like the way that you did not write a fully hot lemon scene cuz that would have made the lump in me throat go away and the true feelings of this story would also have been gone. awesome work. i do hope to see more of your stories.

I enjoyed this so much