Well that was certainly an interesting story to bad it hasn’t been updated in such a long time

Absolutely fucking retarded

At the paragraph weere you hade them nominate the genin for the chunin exams you said kakashi hayate

Ddi

update

U should have him use summoning jutsu like in the canon version

What did you do to the dream team

Make more chapters

Ch 1
Holy hell! Is danzo not a dick?! I loath the man for his selfishness, so seeing him do something for another is suprising. I truly hope he is good and not an ass. For a second i thought he was after the uzumaki's knowledge.

It’s a great fic, damn shame you stopped writing it.

I dont like how you wrote the part where Naruto talked about the Uzumaki gate seal, and then he handed the scroll over that was basically a recipe for it. It’s Fuinjutsu not ninjitsu if you look at a seal it should tell you how to make it and if that’s the case he shouldn’t be just showing it off to this guy had had only just meet within the last day I mean ffs it’s a clan secret and he’s just handing it out.

I really don’t know how to feel about this Danzo because everyone makes him out to be some snake (I mean it’s literally unavoidable because no matter what he eventually has to work with Orochimaru to get the first Hokages genes for his arm and the Uchiha eyes, and no matter how you spin it he’s evil) and you’re making him out to be a very agreeable villain (personally I’m chaotic neutral so I agree with most evil things so long as you’re not stealing personal stuff I.e birthrights and clan rights) his view right now is one I’m very much liking and on board for so long as he acts accordingly, I mean their ninja redirection and subtle manipulation so long as your not a complete snake is alright.

I just found this story recently and it is fantastic! I hope you are still going to finish it.

Update please!

So I realize that this fic may not have been attended for quite some time but if you ever find a time when you feel like fine tuning your older works than I think you could fix this issue:

"character a speaking to character b" character b than does an action in response

"Character b responding to character a" character a does a counter action in response.

Having one character's lines adjacent to the other's behavior can cause confusion, disorientation, misinterpretation etc. and I think this fanfic still has much untapped potential.