Reviews for Story of Us
Ash Lightwood. Shadowhunter chapter 34 . 8/31/2016
Not that I didn't enjoy the story (or the ending) but I thought she was told she couldn't have children because she was too damaged after the Diane and Curtis fiasco?
lizyeh2000 chapter 34 . 9/20/2014
Love the story! Please update soon, now following!
well chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
So Elizabeth seems kind of like a huge Mary Sue right now, and the writing style comes off as a little stilted and unnatural but this story shows some promise so hopefully it gets better...
p95000 chapter 33 . 8/26/2013
I'm glad Reid and Lizzie got married. Great ending with Lizzie announcing she was pregnant.
Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 32 . 8/20/2013
I like your story! Update soon!
fantasydreama chapter 17 . 8/18/2013
Very good story so Far only one small thing I would like to bring to your attention to make this story easier to read in the future is that you switch from narrative to first person in middle of sentences it makes it hard for me to read other than that keep up the good work many thanks
p95000 chapter 32 . 8/18/2013
I'm glad Lizzie accepted Reid's propsal.
helpmecasey312 chapter 32 . 8/17/2013
Can not wait for the next chapter! Will you describe the wedding in detail? Also, will the wedding happen soon or ...? Good luck and have fun writing
fandomenforcer chapter 32 . 8/17/2013
Finally! Also, love the Bruno Mars lyric at the end. Can't wait for them to nail Agent Tom, I always thought of him as a creep. Like James Moriarty
helpmecasey312 chapter 31 . 8/12/2013
This is a great story and I love the fact that for once it was spence in trouble and not Liz! Haha and I hope that you are able to update soon! I have to know of spence and Liz are going to be ok and get married! And there has to be a way for kids to be in the picture right?! Good and luck and have fun with it!
p95000 chapter 31 . 8/12/2013
I hope Reid will be okay.
p95000 chapter 30 . 8/9/2013
I'm glad Lizzie and Spencer made up and she called Spencer about her dream.
p95000 chapter 29 . 8/5/2013
Tom is a jerk I glad Lizzed elbowed him. I hope Spencer and Lizzie get back together.
some bread chapter 28 . 8/4/2013
D': I knew it once Spencer walked in, I knew what was going to happen. Omg I can't wait for the next chapter.
p95000 chapter 28 . 8/4/2013
I'm glad Elizabeth spent the weekend with her dad. I'm sorry Spencer is using Dilaudid again.
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