UPDATE!

Very interesting. Hope you continue.

Hope you continue your story. It is very good.

Noooo that cliffhanger was mean! Did she break his fingers? Please make Katniss take care of him and take him in :)

WHEAT. HAHAHA. Sorry. Funny name. I get it though. Peeta. Rye has been pretty much agreed upon by this fandom. But you never really hear the other brothers name, you know? Wheat cracked me up. I remember seeing one named Crois once. Short for Croissant. Also hilarious. There's just not another good name for the second brother, is there? Wow. I talk a lot. Okay. Sorry. I like to write my review as I read, so I may get a little long winded. Though, I suspect that most writers don't mind. I certainly don't.
One thing: When there's new speaker, you start a new paragraph. Example:
"Good morning, Peeta." Katniss said, with a yawn.
Peeta smiles warmly. "Good morning, Katniss."

I hope that made sense. :)

I love the "we have a big, big, big day" thing. That made me laugh. Effie is my spirit animal.

Well. Hello. I haven't read Hunger Game fanfiction in a very long time, but when I saw that you'd updated, I decided to read this story again. I'm assuming I followed it a long time ago? I really don't remember, at all. So, I'm reading it again, since I've been on a hiatus for a while, since I've just been in a different fandom. Anyways, I'm rambling. Sorry.
I liked this first chapter. I like that you gave a summary of it all, and let us see into the characters before the story began. That was nice to see. Your writing style is good, too. Okay. I'm going to read chapter 2, now.

cliff hanger! Scream i am loving it?

Oh! I love this

Love it. Keep up the good work. Update soon

Please continue!

Oww poor peeta:( love this fic im glad you updated it and I hope katniss gets together with him soon

I loved it! Please continue.

ahhhhhhh please update soon love it

Please write more I really want to know what happens

Make more plz