| Reviews for I Keep Forgetting Theres an Us |
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   XYZArtemis chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 Nicely done! I think you did a great job on the characterizations :) |
| lilmymyshem chapter 1 . 8/8/2018 I love moments like this for Rise of the Guardians. Its nice to see the take on him getting to accept how he isn't alone anymore instead of it being an instant thing because of his past. |
| Erisah Mae chapter 1 . 10/6/2017 Awwww. Sweet. |
| Bibbledoo chapter 1 . 12/15/2014 Aaand he passed out. Tell me when visiting hours are. |
| AuthorVictorious chapter 1 . 4/18/2014 Please tell me there will be more. O-O It feels like he died. |
| lemonChocolate chapter 1 . 11/3/2013 Wow, is this really a new prompt?! Omg haven't seen one of those forever! I think you might even be able to add another chapter, if you wanted to. Well, good story anyhow! (Sorry, i have an account, but it's not letting me log in) |
| PhoenixWytch chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 Oh boy...they keep forgetting that Jack was on his own for 300 years, just as Jack is forgetting that they are his friends & willing to help him. Thanks for writing & sharing. |
| LunaEchoWillow chapter 1 . 8/31/2013 cute |
| Dragowolf chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Oh Jack... the Guardians are going to have quite the job ahead of them teaching you that there is an "Us". But it looks like this recent injury will take some time to heal. Maybe they'll get their chance. |
| EmotionalDreamer101 chapter 1 . 7/6/2013 This is so cute, I love this so much. I love how Jack is just confused and then in the end he realizes how they all care for him and he can call for help. This is adorable. I love the end with Bunnymund's part. So cute. |
| wanderwithme4now chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 This was a fantastic piece. I really enjoyed reading it especially the different reactions of each guardian. Nothing like a life or death situation to see how they really feel about each other... Please add more. I would really like to read about the Jack being healed and comforted by the rest of the Guardians. You write in a way that compels people to read and I would love to read more of that! |
| dizappearingirl chapter 1 . 6/19/2013 I like this a lot! I love the narrating, very conversational, very Jack. It was like he was telling us the story and so sometimes it would go on a tangent or side comment like you hear when someone is talking but not usually in a narration. Very cool! Also, love a story where a character is in trouble but doesn't quite realize that he has others to help him! (And Jack Frost is a gold mine of this kinda stuff!) I like your version. He really does seem confused by the attention and the reason they would be. But, in this case it's not accompanied by bitterness, which is a nice surprise after the many angsty pieces I've read (which I also love!) But it's nice to see something where Jack is just plain confused, not angry or bitter. Good job! -Dizgirl |
| Chicken-Flakes-Writes chapter 1 . 6/13/2013 Is there going to be another chapter? I do hope so. I would totally read it. |
| PippaFrost chapter 1 . 6/5/2013 okay! nobody panic! please tell me there's a next chapter coming! pleaseee! |
| alight chapter 1 . 6/5/2013 THIS CAN'T BE A ONE SHOT OMG. I know it's not a death fic, but MY HEART says it is! Oh, and it was super cute and I laughed a lot (stupid Jack casually greeting people with "'heeey didja miss me" when they find him broken or crushed and I could SEE North waving his arms and yelling "Eh? 'Hey North?'" ajskagsjaks) and I also really liked the title. It's a great title. Now please get Jack out from underneath that tree! |
