| Reviews for Ayo and Maka |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 7/5/2013 I would love ayo to meet spirit |
| Vampirelover564 chapter 12 . 6/9/2013 The only thing that kept going through my head was: is Soul going to get mad?. guess not. It was pretty awsome though. |
 michaelhayate chapter 14 . 6/10/2013 wow cant wait for the second book |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/8/2013 dont listen to her please. I know shes suggesting but shes starting to write the story for you. What she described was bassically two whole chapters that you could have thought of on your own. |
| A Hero in Progress chapter 14 . 6/10/2013 Can't wait for book 2 |
| AVP5 chapter 14 . 6/10/2013 Looking forward to more keep it up |
| AVP5 chapter 12 . 6/9/2013 Looking forward to more update when you got time please |
| Vampire lover564 chapter 11 . 6/9/2013 can't wait for more! there soo good. i wish i could write like that! |
| Psyka chapter 12 . 6/8/2013 Awesome please update as soon as you can |
| daniela chapter 6 . 6/5/2013 maybe black star can ask Ayo if he likes Maka...and maybe if he says yes, black star can freak out a little meanwhile Kid overhears him and reacts expressionless until he walks outside and starts boiling with anger...but that's for when the time black star finds out what to ask Ayo, but in the meantime Maka can start hanging out with him, study at the library and make her fall in love with him little by little...Hope this with help you!:) |
| michaelhayate chapter 12 . 6/7/2013 *blinks* another two chapters *blinks again* kid is on a serious rampage *blinks once more* soul and black*star know everything *blinks one final time* maka and ayo slept together *passes out* great update |
| daniela reyes chapter 6 . 6/5/2013 black star should ask ayo if he likes maka and maybe freak out because he may secretly like her too... |
| daniela reyes chapter 1 . 6/5/2013 don't post 1 or 2 chapters a day!your comics are sooo good! |
| daniela reyes chapter 6 . 6/5/2013 all the chapters were good...and just a question, how long does it take you just to make on chapter? |
| michaelhayate chapter 10 . 6/7/2013 amazing how underhanded the son of a grim reaper can be :D and black*star falls for the bait. Great chapter. |
