Love it

I absolutely loved this story, but... WHERE'S THE NEXT PART?! THE EXCHANGE?! DO MAGNUS AND ALEC GET OUT ALIVE AND SAFE?! ARE THEY ABLE TO CONTINUE THEIR RELATIONSHIP?! (My thoughts, obviously! but I still need clarification.) What will happen to: Julian? Jace? Clary? (Clace?) Izzy? Robert? Valentine? Sebastian? I NEED ANSWERS PLEASE!

On a more calm and collected note, I would like to take a moment to congratulate you. You are an incredible writer, as you are able to take inspiration from another's work and yet turn the product into something entirely your own. Your command of language is admirable, as it is well-crafted, enabling many emotions to be felt by the reader as they accompany the characters on their journey's. Not only do you intertwine raw emotions with those that develop, you also add a sense of ominous foreboding to simple pieces, and make practically all scenes exhilarating. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing that couldn't be easily understood as a typo, and something that could be easily corrected with a proof-read; but as a fellow writer, I can understand re-reading your own work and still missing errors, especially if the piece is long as many of your works are. However, do not let this sway your writing as it does not, in any way, impact the overall atmospheric feel of the piece itself and in some ways adds to it. For example, it adds to Alec's sense of nervousness with intimate situations around Magnus, highlighting just how good of a writer you are.

So, to conclude, you are a phenomenal writer and I hope you continue to do so. (Or I will commission Cassandra Clare to have all of her Shadowhunter's and Warlock's kick your ass until you do! (And I don't threaten, I promise.)) Anyway, I wish you all the best with your future endeavours reading writing, and I cannot wait to read the finale of what happens to Magnus and Alec, because you will finish or I will find you and force you to finish it, because I need to know what happens to MALEC! So pretty, pretty, please, you fantastic writer you, write the ending and don't leave me hanging.

And you just in case you didn't believe me about all of the compliments I gave you, just know that they were not just for show, they are true and you do do all of those things. (I said do do! Ha ha!) Well done, and good luck!

this is an awesome story! is part two out?

Hey I'm reviewing because YOU SAID it matters to you and that "hey, someone's reading and you're just being selfish by not working on it." (i think that was from the beginning of chapter 7? did you get bored or blocked or something?))
So yeah, really enjoyed this rather well written and well thought-out story. Good original plot, good character development, with few grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors...but (and there's always a but with any freaking unfinished ff story that i really freaking like) of course, it ends...with NO recent updates in FOREVER...right when I really really needed you to continue. I'll follow this story anyways in the event you decide to keep going. Which you should definitely do. Now!
Thank you :)

Fantastic story, please update soon!

you can't just end it there. It's so good! Honestly this really needs updating

i really hope you continue this! it's an awesome plot and ive really enjoyed reading it.

Please update soon! The suspense is absolutely killing me!

Exciting! I'm looking forward to the next update!

Good story! Why does Magnus assume the son of FBI agents who is a complete innocent and not greedy, as he mentioned, wants to be a criminal? He seems to have no doubt that Alec wants to be his partner in crime.
I'm looking forward to reading more!

I am one the edge of my seat! Please update soon! That was great!

amazing! just saying its Ariadne not Ariande. Great story otherwise!

I was so happy to see this story got a new chapter!

This chapter really pushed the plot, I loved it. Very glad to see Clary in action as well.

I hope everything will go according to plan, though it rarely does... Can't wait for more!

And I would absolutely love a little sequel!

I was expecting more hurt Alec from that warning up top. But urgh! So stressful! I just want to give Alec an electric blanket and cocoa.

I, personally, prefer sequels over "part 2's".

I need the next chapter omfg