I'm a sucker for Happy Ending and I love for that!

I'm actually sorry Naruto and Sasuke ended up together. Naruto was a coward and a scumbag. He was a serial cheater who had multiple flings while he was still with Hinata, before he and Sasuke ever met. There's no way he won't do the same to Sasuke, no matter what he says now. Once a cheater, always a cheater. Naruto thought he loved Hinata too, but look how he played her.

On top of that, Naruto took Sasuke's virginity thinking it was just going to be another one of his flings. That's cruel, no matter how you look at it. Sasuke thought about trying out gay sex with a random guy at a bar, but there's a difference between an encounter like that, where it's obvious it's going to be a quick and dirty one-off, and taking a person home with you and cooking them a meal. Doing all that is misleading because it implies you like the person and wouldn't mind for there to be something more between you than just sex. So he totally led Sasuke on the whole time.

But Naruto really showed what a punk he is after the truth came out. Instead of doing the right thing, he wouldn't make a decision and wanted to keep both Sasuke and Hinata. He kept saying he couldn't break the engagement because he was afraid of Hiashi, but come on; the story Hiashi told at Hinata's engagement party was all about how Naruto stood up to him. Naruto could have broken that engagement any time he wanted to, Hiashi be damned. Naruto just didn't know what he really wanted and that's why he kept putting Sasuke off every time he asked him to choose.

I don't believe him when he says he would have stopped the wedding if Sasuke hadn't intervened. The "speak now" part happens at the end of the ceremony, usually after the bride and groom have already spoken their vows. If Naruto thought he couldn't share those vows with anyone but Sasuke, why did he say "I do"? In the end, Naruto was nothing but a selfish coward.

Even if the fic ends happily, I really don't see a happy ending for this couple down the line.

I don't get it. Why would Sasuke love Naruto so much? And why didn't Naruto cancel the wedding before standing at the alter, when he seems so keen to go with Sasuke in the end?
Poor Hinata by the way. Sasuke told her that her finance is cheating in her and she still marries him. Did I miss something?

The writing was nice but aw man, I dislike Naruto here as much as I like Sasuke, and usually I sympathize with Naruto. Both Sasuke and Hinata should've dumped and drop-kicked his ass. No redeeming qualities at all.

Sasuke...Sasuke...Sasuke...you are awesome..guy.

I LOVE IT !

Oh god, I absolutely hated Naruto's character in this story. Seriously. I wish Sasuke had gone to the wedding, told everyone there what Naruto had done to him, and then afterwards dumped Naruto on his selfish, cheating arse. Naruto is clearly not in love with anyone but himself and his own desires and has no consideration or care for anyone else, not Hinata, not Sasuke, nobody. I can't even properly describe how much I hated Naruto in this story. This is honestly the first story I've read where I've disliked Naruto so much.

omg...its so cute
love the story

you did a really good job!

Your story was so romantic! I enjoyed reading it very much

Feel bad for Hinata but I'm happy they are together.
Eeh you're not going to write anymore? Whyyy? ; w ;a I like all of your stories, but everyone has life so I wish the best for you. :'3
Hope you'll write again someday if you have time.

like it :) thanks

awesome but poor hinata.

i like this story but i kinda wish naruto wasnt such a douchebag throughout it.

Good story! The thing I like the most is that it's so close to reallity. The way Naruto acts is something that you can see everyday, a lot of people turns into cowards in a situation like this and act selfishly because it's easier to have "both worlds", I'm happy that you made Sasuke the better man of the two, the one who really had the guts to do the right end is a bittersweet happy ending, because yeah, who can tell Naruto won't do the same thing again? Well... obviously all NS fans that are reading this want to be a happily ever after xDDDD So yeah, a really good story! (BTW sorry if I've mispelled something)