Can't wait till the next installation, even if it will take forever I bet this story's gonna be great~!

Update please

This is fascinating. I really enjoyed the interaction between the brothers in chapter one, and the sex as challenge in the second chapter has me wondering how we get from playboy soul in this chapter to the rather broken down guy in the first. Color me intrigued. Can't wait to see where this goes!

(now A Lion Mane of Lotuses on tumblr)
SWEET BABY JESUS A NEW CHAPTER
Okay, first of all, you are like my favorite writer up there with like Marsh of sleep (Goddess of SE fic).
Second, I am so used to the tumblr head cannoned Soul, who is a dorky musician cuddle bug, that I always kind of get weirded out by fics that show him as a rude player douche (the second chapter). Although, as I go back and read the first chapter I kinda feel that it's more of a front and it seems that Maka helped him become a better person (the attitude was gone). I am not even sure this is what you were going for, but dont mind me. It was a great chapter to understand how things started and your writing is spectacular anyway.
Also: I personally feel its important to tell fanfiction authors to take their time when writing. One of my favorites had actually gone on hiatus because he was harassed so often to update.

Haha, poor Soul. :)

I seriously SERIOUSLY LOVE how you portrayed Maka in this.

Keep it up!

This was a really great update! This has always been one of my favorites, even though you left it on a cliffhanger lol. When you first posted this story, I copy and pasted it onto my phone so I could read it anywhere I went; so I'm very happy that you continued this story and wrote a second chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Continue! This is so cool! I really wanna know what happens! I love how this is going so far! Goodluck!

This is fantastic work! All of your stories are all hideously under reviewed, it make me sad. This is One of my favorites! I really hope you will update soon!

Normally I go on long rants if I feel the need to review, but truly, all I can say is: this is stunning. For the love of all things that are holy, please update this ASAP. Brilliant.

I really, really enjoyed this. So far, it's got my attention and I'm excited for the next chapter. It's well written, and with a lot more "oomph" than many stories I've read lately. If that makes sense? It feels more like a novel than simply a fan fiction. I love reading how Soul and Wes act with each other, and as I stated before, I hope to see an update soon! (:

Oh wow, what a cliff hanger! I really do hope you finish this soon; it's beautifully writen. I love the way Soul and Wes interact too!