Oh , is beautiful story. You write more ?

Great little story there. Loved it. Glad you caught on we need more writers for this fandom. And more fans. We must save it. But hey. Can't wait to see what else you do. I like the way you portrayed Evan. Well done. Haylie Myers

I like this- you captured Evans character well :) are you going to carry on with it? or write a new story like this?...

Nice opening, I'd like to read more :)

I think it's nice)