Reviews for Acclimation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the way you wrote it. It was good and nice and fluffy... a bit... ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that's an interesting (and pretty smart) idea that he'd changed with the more belief he'd receive. And I like that! A little J/T love is just cherry on top too. ;D |
![]() ![]() awwww... this was way too sweet! love frostbite :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Well, um. That kiss was awesome! Best. Story. Ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MAAAAAAHHHHHHOHGODTHISWASPERFECTPLEASEMOREBEFOREIF ORCEANOTHERCHAPTEROUTOFYOUWITHAPAPERCLIP! Okay. Now that that's done... These scenes were amazing. Jack puffing up his chest. Bunny's shit-eating grin. "He usually lies to someone he wants to push off a cliff." And the idea of Jack growing with belief? New and refreshing. Keep up the excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so good! |
![]() ![]() This was great! I really loved it (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very cute and really well written. It made me giggle :) Thanks for sharing! Vee |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was cute. Ha ha, Toothe was quick to say the love thing, wasn't she? |
![]() ![]() This pairing. Just...THIS PAIRING. And your writing! This is just...so adorable. I loved it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple and sweet . Also has an original concept and is very well written . I really enjoyed this fic. Good job. |
![]() ![]() Absolutely, unequivicoally adorable. Loved it from start to finish! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i LOVED the ending! SO clever and cute (and i rarely read romances so thats saying a lot) and i love that jack got t grow up a little bit! *undignified fangirl squeal* erhm, excuse me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, so many updates! Really, this was vey cute and believable; everyone seemed in-character for the most part, and while there were a few slips, you did pretty good with this. My only gripe is that chapters one through three are very short compared to the last, and I feel that they could easily be combined to be more compact. Other than that, this is pretty... well, just /pretty/. I didn't see many mistakes dealing with spelling or grammar, this idea seems rather original, and, as I said before, no one is too OOC. This definitely deserves a favorite, and over all, I give it a 9/10. I'm happy to have you in the Frostbite/RainbowSnowcone community; you look very promising! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww love it love it love it! :D |