Wow, I felt like I was skating on ice so thin it was invisible to the naked eye, and I can't skate!
I felt as if the precipice was a figment of my imagination.
Loved this story and Jim uniqueness and the test it is for everyone around him, not just his alone.

Loudly written (awkward adverb usage, I know, but right). Wonderful

Interesting story, very original, I loved it!