You have to be joking. We’re at the point where Gohan can destroy a planet with a finger. He should not be concerned about hovering too long. Great chapter, and your fight scenes seem to be getting even better. I wonder, will Goku ever agree to fight Cell on Geri’s terms? Or is that not what Gero asked for?

When Gohan said “What would my father do?” My first thought was, bite him. Goku would have most likely bit Frieza by the tail in that situation. I enjoyed that.

Nice. On to the final form. At what point will Gohan have to transform? How powerful is his base now?

Frieza was right, Gohan offered a better challenge when he was four years old. What happened? Surely now that he is fighting for Piccolo, he should be doing even better.

Gohan did surprisingly well for once. Neither of them was even close to defeated, but it didn’t seem like Gohan was in a severe disadvantage like he was when taking Nappa’s blast or holding back against Vegeta.

Ha, so the demons watching can’t even follow a Saiyan saga level fight? I bet it’s going to get sooo much more intense later on. The fight was well done and had some great feels. Nice Chapter.

Wait, if their strength is the same I feel like Gohan should be faring better. But then again that wouldn’t be very interesting. Maybe more psychological warfare would make sense? Wow, I wrote the previous part before reading the Nappa fight to the end. WHY DIDN’T HE DODGE?!

Nice fight scene, and great chapter over all.

Nani?! I like your interpretation of hell, it is kinda, mass produced though. No personal hells? Or is that just for the REAL baddies. Also I’ve always thought of Raditz as a brawler, he shouldn’t have a chance in hell against a real martial artist. (Get it? Hell?) ok I’ll go now.

Very interesting so far. Many people on this site have very different interpretations of hell. I can’t wait to find out what happens next.

Looks great so far, everyone is in character and it’s seems to have a great plot and tons of potential.

Wow, this was amazing. Definitely the best DBZ fanfiction, and certainly one of the top ones ever.

Fantastic story. Very unique to all the other fanfics out there. Whole story seemed unlikely to happen yet you wrote it beautifully and really conveyed your thoughts well. Thanks for a good read!

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