I really love this story. I'm glad you didn't delete it and thank you for writing and posting it in the first place.
I know how difficult and shitty it can be to put yourself out there and be so vulnerable, sharing a part of yourself for all to see and judge, but you are very brave and talented and fuck anyone who says otherwise.

I enjoyed your story thoroughly and it made me smile a great deal. I'm so glad it ended on a happy note )
I hope you are well and still writing and being awesome.

Keep on keeping on.

I'm somewhat annoyed that there was no warning that this was a slash fic. Perhaps you like stumbling upon fetish fics with no heads up. Like, a misleading story description, turn the page and Bam! Scat!... its annoying and avoidable. If I had known I wouldn't have bothered reading even as much of this story as I did... slash is a theme I'm uninterested in reading about and I'm annoyed that my time has been wasted. Please fix your story description, it'll make it easier for those that enjoy such stories to find it and will allow those that don't care to read such stories to avoid it. Win/Win. Thank you.

ok...great update but now where is the next chapter! I am loving this story!

Hola tu historia me gustó mucho espero que la termines y no hagas caso de gente idiota suerte bay.

Love this story!

if you would like a hand correcting some of the spelling and grammar mistakes I would be happy to help :)

Dammit wrong story lol sorry.

Awww. There's no supernatural vampires or wolves or anything like that in this story? :(

WOOT! More updates soon for this? yes? lol that would be awesome!

Needs more chapters.

Great story I hope you come back

Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon? For English not being your first language your pretty damn good at it.

Hi! just finished reading your story, and i loved it. I kinda understand from your last words (i missed the initial fallout that caused it) that this story was written a long time ago?

Yes, there are some odd spelling errors, but it's free entertainment we get here on fanfiction dot net. At least you are writing, and you are trying. And the storytelling itself i loved, so you're doing it right! :)

Anyways, I'm hoping this story will continue, despite suspicions that it might have been a long time since the last chapter was written.

Oi! I happened to like this story. I don't think whatever those folks said was stupid and well just uncouth. I think you really shouldn't let em get ya down. Ah, not good at this stuff just you know dont give into the haters.

The idear of your storys a good but once i notice that almost all of your sentenc beginn whi He
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I couldn't
I couldn,t read it
I couldn't read it anymor

disappointed you'll be deleting you're work honestly. Good luck on you're book. I can't wait Until you'll be active on again. (that is, if you will become active).