I love the original of that poem but you did it justice, well done.

Totally beautiful!

Wonderful. Keep up the good work :)

Daww. I-I can't. Check back later and I'll start talking but right now. I just- I- aww.

Actually made me cry. Thank you for breaking my heart

This is so sad and sweet at the same time! I'm about to start crying! Written very good! :')

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nice story. I 've read almost similar story like this from facebook just last week.

Great story! It made me cry! I love it!

Thank you for the words which just made me cry. Just little words that make a beautiful and, for me, very emotional story. On this site, it is the first story in long time (if not ever) that made me cry not from the whole happy scene but from the feelings that were confessed. Thank you one more time.

ugh that broke my heart... as a widowed single mom, i understand. Beautifully written

This was great!

I know what poem you are basing this on and it is amazing :D I was sitting in a public place a bit bored so went on to see if there were and new stories on and found this one :) It had me fighting back tears the first time I read the poem and this time was just the same :) It was lovely and very emotional :D

Oh man. That was super cute. The poem you based that off of is one of my favorites.

That was incredible, so sad, but sweet and with such a nice ending. It's a real tear jerker, that tugs at the heartstrings. Thank You,
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).