Reviews for One More Chance
davieschris819 chapter 12 . 5/12/2018
epic
Katie MacAlpine chapter 12 . 4/10/2018
I could not stop reading this story! The only breaks I took were for dinner and charging my tablet. This is the best fic for 28 Weeks Later. Excellent writing. Thank you for writing this.
Divinara chapter 12 . 12/6/2013
I don't know how or why, but I thought this story ended at chapter eleven. The few times I pulled down the chapter list, I seriously thought there was nothing past eleven. Because of that, I was a little confused by TBC at the end of that chapter. I'm glad I got a little bit more out of this story-it was a great way to end it.
Divinara chapter 11 . 12/6/2013
LOVED IT! Except for a grammatical error here and there, it was very well-written, the plot was easy to follow, and the detail was great. I'm glad I stumbled across this gem. Checking out your profile, I'm glad to see that you are still very involved in writing and posting on this site, so I look forward to checking out more stuff by you, especially since you enjoy writing about Renner's characters; an actor I've become very impressed with in recent years.
Divinara chapter 8 . 12/6/2013
Still loving the story! I'm glad even your characters had the same reaction I did to Doyle's name.

;)
Divinara chapter 6 . 12/6/2013
I love that Vince and his gang got what was coming to them. Honestly, that whole situation you were beginning to write and allude to was the reason I only watched 28 Days Later once and I hate the movie with such passion (which is why I'm surprised that I loved this movie so much). Men feeling like they are entitled to treat women any way they like during extreme situations like this...it's disgusting. I'm glad you killed them off.

"...hum the theme from Jeopardy." That was hilarious! I love how awkward and uncomfortable Doyle is with this mantle of leadership. I definitely don't see him as a Nigel, though, so I hope you keep referring to him as Doyle.

If you ever decide to revisit this story (I don't know why you would as it is impressively written so far), I would highly recommend including a character list at the head of every two or three chapters. You keep introducing new characters in every chapter and its getting harder and harder to keep who's who straight. Just a thought.

I'm going to get back to reading now. ;)
Divinara chapter 4 . 12/5/2013
I was a little wary when you turned Doyle into an instant father, but, so far, I like where it's going. Still loving the story...

:)
Divinara chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
Great story so far! I don't know if you did any research (beyond watching the movies) in order to write this, but you definitely sound like you know what you're talking about. I certainly can't keep up with military jargon and all that. Your ideas are flowing smoothly and its easy to follow your plot line. I think what I appreciate most about your writing is your use of asterisks in place of cursing. I'm not stupid; I know what they are there for and I appreciate you using them so I don't have to read the words themselves. I'd get a lot more enjoyment out of many more stories, if more people did what you were doing. Thanks!
Linneanna chapter 12 . 9/11/2013
Wow, this story is the first one I read in my foray into this fandom and it blew me away!
The characters really come to live in your writing. Normally, I'm not a huge fans of OCs, but those in your story grew on me very quickly :) I just couldn't put it down, literally read it through the night and now I'm kind of sad it's over
thank you for sharing this perfect piece of writing! I never thought a Zombie story would be one of the best reads I've ever had :D
keep up the good work :)
TheNaggingCube chapter 12 . 8/16/2013
I missed the previous chapter when it posted (Darn work). So I got to enjoy both in one sit down. This was an utterly awesome, utterly well written, utterly wonderful fic. You made each step completely believable all your OCs were amazing and very rich and I loved them all.

A completely believable and lovely happily ever after ending. I know this story is finished but I would love to read more of yours. Have you ever watched Inspector Lewis with the dishy and outstanding actor Laurence Fox?
ladygris chapter 12 . 8/15/2013
Really enjoyed this final chapter! Pip and Gracie meeting his family was classic, as was the way Doyle proposed to her! LOL!

Great story!
ladygris chapter 11 . 8/15/2013
Hehe! I love it when Doyle pulls rank!

Kira. . . .HEART BREAKING! But so perfect!
TheNaggingCube chapter 10 . 8/10/2013
OH this chapter was lovely in a wickedly painful way.

Billy with Pip and Doyle.

Kira... gawds that phrase of running in place... so horrible and fitting.

Please keep this coming. My heart aches to know where it is all going.

Plus we gotta see more Gracie and Doyle.
Shazrolane chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
Interesting twist; you are definitely ratcheting up the tension.
TheNaggingCube chapter 9 . 8/4/2013
Oh my what a chapter. Holy crap... so seizure meds can hold off the symptoms?
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