I have been looking for a stories like this for a long time. It Looks good.

Aaaannnd this turned bad. You had an amazing story and had to ruin it by making kitsune humans. What was becoming my fav story. Smh.

WTF Pet naruto

This has been a great story, and I've really enjoyed it. Thank you for what you wrote.

Ok got to say this a great story and long stopped but for the future if you read this the Sakura fight was bad, if not outright terrible writing. Cannon Sakura fight would have been this fight, but you didn't make Sakura cannon after the second time she should have tried some Jutsu not gone for the kick.

Okay that was seriously awesome!

More! I love it!

you know? do not pay attention to those who criticize YOUR story I love her and I would love you to follow her, and those who criticize that they rot, for something the story is YOURS.

Fuck you, seriously fuck you. I had so much hope for your story but fuck you for constantly underestimating Naruto and making him so weak. WHY THE FUCK DID HE FAINT AGAIN ?! It’s not impressive like Gai and Lee seem to think, it’s just stupid. I think the greatest insult is saying that Naruto was running on fumes. He did NOTHING during the fight, he didn’t throw any jutsus (not that he knows any), or any clones and he’s running on fumes ?! Fuck you. Do you know how much chakra Naruto has ? Apparently not.

I think you also don’t realise how resilient the original Weapon X, Logan, is. You keep writing “to survive”, “surviving” whenever Naruto is fighting but nobody currently in Konoha could kill him ! You’d need to nuke entirely to kill Naruto. Naruto is basically like Kimimaro but even more resilient because of his supposedly increased healing factor and the metal coating his bones and he’s supposed to be like Logan. Kimimaro survived Gaara’s sand funeral, but Naruto faints after Lee’s Lotus ?!

So your fight was shit as it was just Naruto getting kicked around and still winning. He did absolutely nothing but faint. So fuck you and your story

You downplay Naruto’s capacities a lot and it’s annoying. Ok maybe his healing factor isn’t as strong as Logan’s but in every fight Team 8 was into, he came out the worst. He fainted against Zabuza (this is the weirdest, why the fuck did he faint if the only thing he did was channel his chakra to block one attack ? Are you fucking kidding me ?), then he also fainted after being stabbed with a simple knife by Gato (once again why ?! It wasn’t poisoned so why did he faint ?) and he was concussed against the night village guy while Hinata or Shino were absolutely fine ! (Him being concussed is logical given the attack he did but did he have to do that in the first place ?! Why couldn’t he see where the guy was coming from ? Did you have him close his eyes just to showcase his whiskers abilities ?)

It’s getting pretty annoying as it seems like Naruto is so weak compared to the rest of his team. You have everyone say that Naruto progressed a lot and he’s been dragging his teammates with him, but I fail to see any progress ! He was more impressive when he fought Ko at the beginning for fucks sake ! Hinata has already displayed great improvement and a lot of ass kicking ability so the next Naruto fight will be very important to me as a reader.

I also wanted to mention how having teams from Kumo and Iwa was dumb. Konoha isn’t allied with these two nations and therefore would never accept to receive them in their Chuunin exams. That’s why there was no Kumo or Iwa team in canon. I don’t know why fanfic authors think Konoha would be cool with letting their ennemies in their village...

I won’t talk about this Iwa nobody who apparently went “toe to toe” with Minato... as if

RTFA or Run The Fuck Away right ?

Ahhh Sakura you fucked up !

Naruto could be kicking more ass ! Why did he seem to faint after being stabbed ?! Did he slice trough anyone with his claws ?

Oh yeah Naruto ! Time to cut some people in half !

“Who’s Nee-chan new plushy ?” Haha I loved that statement from Hanabi !