I can't wait for chapter four

Another awesome chapter I told my friend Emma about how both types of Shinigami exist she seem to love the idea that one severed life while the other lead to the after life

I love it first DN crossover that doesn't hurt me so keep up the good work

I read a few of these chapters and it is very interesting :)! It's very creative, having the idea the existence of a body reaper and a soul reaper. Your character, Mei, I don't know her fully from the chapters I read, but I can see she's very interesting.

I also like the use of explanation about Bleach and Death Note, answers many questions and so-called holes, since it is a crossover, there is bound to be some.

As for grammar, there are a few mistakes, but isn't as bothersome as other fanfics I've read that make me cringe.