Omg I loved this. Just perfect

Wow

I Love this FanFic it has very good Details
The pairing is also one of my favourite
Well you did a Great Job

I CAN'T GET ENOUGH!

This was the BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ!

Of course reservations with the dub-con, on the other hand...totally not out of the realm of possibility for Mahiro.
BTW, I always felt that the three of them would make a good polyamorous relationship. With Yoshino's natural submission to their domineering personalities - like Aika told Mahiro when she said he and Yoshino were perfectly matched.

I can't believe I left the second chapter un-reviewed. This is one of the best smuts I've read, and I loved every bit of the characterization and little-bitty details that made this story wonderful. From Mahiro's crappy-but perfect-personality, and Yoshino's adorable reactions that inadvertently ended up turning Mahiro on, everything was perfect.

Yoshino is submissive and adorable, and he contrasts perfectly with Mahiro. The whole story was vividly described, creating a hyper-sensitive atmosphere and even though the sex was rough, it was also intimate and personal.

Mahiro's desire for Yoshino beautifully progressed throughout the story, and I absolutely loved the ending, where Mahiro reconciles with himself that it is Yoshino he wants in the end.

Beautifully done.

this is probably the longest sex scene I've ever read o.O. good one tho, and please continue :v

Oh my god your characterization of Mahiro is so precise, to the point! Though this is a smut fic, this has the best characterization of Mahiro I'd ever read! Kudos to you!

that...was...hot...
damn...i'm out of words.
definitely favoriting this!

ooh my god, i'm love with this fic, so hot

That was a hot and very in character sex scene WHOOO! Loved it! I swear this is why I like small fandoms coz then I don't have to nitpick through a pile of fanfic to find the good ones. Thanks for this! I needed some smexy feels for this pairing HAHA

I wish you had used more of Yoshino personnality. He is passive but he is vicious too. Where is Yoshino payback ? And Mahiro is strong and all but he can easily be put in a corner by Aika and Yoshino.

you know what ? I like your story
But You really what I would love ? A sequel with Mahiro whom lean that Yoshino's grilfriend is Aika XD

The way Mahiro want to dominate is really like him but it's really a bad way to express his wants... Poor Yoshino. But nice writing anyway, the descriptions are really great, you make me feel in the room with them (it was terribly hot)