Oh my gosh! I just found/finished this in 2020 and I’m in love with the story! I know I’m late to the party but I just had to write and say how much I loved it, hope you’re doing well!

This is pretty damn good. I hope you decide to continue this

eeekkk! the truth comes out

i'm so glad Ned knows Lyanna's true motives; she's learning to play the game!

This is truly quite impressive, your Lyanna and Tyrion joint venture sounds like a political dream. I hope you will get back to this story one day...

Hmmm... is this one where Jon is the actual bastard and Ned used the opportunity to make Lyanna his twin?

I like the plot! Though not sure I understand where the hostility of Jon came from after the Long Night tale...

Lyanna Snow Visenya Targaryen?

"He would never abandon herwhat are you talking about?! He already did. He abandoned you when he'd taken that oath.

It really is surprising that Jon would still continued on taking the Black. He have a twin that would be left behind, I thought that he only want to be in the Night's Watch is because he doesn't belong, he could easily belong with wherever her sister is going especially with the favour of the King, he could be her sworn guard or something, I just couldn't believe he'll leave his twin just like that.

so wish you were updating.

Loooooove it!

If Ser Barristan obviously knew that Lyanna was Prince Rhaegar's daughter, why would he leave without her? He should have absconded with her and THEN found Daererys...after all, she has a stronger claim to the throne than Dany does and the reason he left is to be a Kingsguard to the rightful heir to the Throne, right?

Good story. Lyanna learn to survive in the viper's nest, manoeuvring the king with caution. She protect her Sansa who didn't realize how cruel Cersei and Joffrey are. Jaime is finally back and feel possessive toward his wife and child.

Too bad the story seems to have been abandonned.

I have loved your story. I hope that could write more. I would like to see this Lianna meeting Daenerys. Maybe after the red wedding, Lyanna and Sansa sail to Mereen with the help of Tyrion and Varys. I was wondering if Lyanna would take his baby with her, anyway, I think she would not feel comfortable leaving Jamie since he has been nice with her, so she would give him some sort of explanation and apology message. Giving that Sir Barristan is in Mereen would help them to being welcomed by Daenerys.