Never thought that one sentence could shock me that much. But it was really good, thank you :)

For a moment there, you REALLY made me worry, Sandra. *tips hat*

I'm sure you're right, Peter would never intrude on Neal's feeling - being well aware that the younger man isn't usually comfortable with expressing them this way - and ask about the hug or the desperation therein. He'll just be Peter and hug back, offering comfort to his friend/defacto surrogate son.

Your scenarios about Neal visiting Peter in prison were well-thoughtout and sound, Sandra. Well done!

I really enjoyed this one, although the one paragraph - Neal visits Peter's grave - gave me a shock at first. But I can so see Peter pushing another prisoner out of the way and Neal's fury followed by a silent realization that this is who Peter is; perfectly in character for both.
Loved the ending!

This was brilliant, short and hard hitting. The nightmare threw me for a while. Bravo

I really enjoyed this! I liked Neal's observations on Peter as the visits progressed. Peter pushing the other prisoner out of the way is so him. Neal visiting Peter's grave gave me jolt at first. It could have easily went that way. But thankfully it was just a nightmare. The ending is lovely. You captured Peter and Neal very well here and this could easily fit into canon. Especially since you left things open as to how things were resolved.

I really enjoyed this - lovely snapshots, and you manage to pack so much into each one, and so much story progression into a very short fic!

Well done. I loved every word of it.

Great job! I like the progression of the visits.
Visiting Peter's grave gave me a jolt! For a moment, I was upset ...
Thanks for showing us how perilous is Peter's situation.

Aw love it!3 So clever and well written. Loved how Peter pushed the prisoner out of the way in the fight. He would so do that3 But omg you scared me at first with the grave part but i loved how you went about it just being a dream. Really skilled writing:) The ending was just awesome! :D

You scared the crap out of me with the grave scene of Neal's nightmare please not ever again

Short and yet so powerful. Full of emotion and so Neal and Peter (Peter pushing the prisoner ouit of the way is so him). The last paragraph is beautifully done. Loved it. *goes to hug the Peter and Neal now, 'cos I think they need it*