| Reviews for The Cosmic Sekiryuutei |
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   james pingree47 chapter 4 . 5/18 I am really so sorry man, I can't take it anymore, I try to give it a try but I just can't, I just feel it out of place man, I'm sorry but I quit this story. |
| james pingree47 chapter 3 . 5/18 why man, why did you have to fuck it up, I was really beginning to like the story man |
| Chyllen chapter 3 . 3/21 Piss poorly written I know this is old but if you can do better now then I suggest a rewrite if not take it down |
| Guest chapter 89 . 10/30/2019 Fantastic story, one of the best I've ever read, and hope you continue making chapters until you get to your desired ending. |
| GoldeN ViZionZ chapter 3 . 9/16/2019 This is so dumb, Rias would never be strong enough to get a half dragon god into her peerage. I also find it ridiculous that he doesn’t know what he is. This story had potential before you decided to have him join rias’s peerage. I am out peace |
| MidnighAce chapter 66 . 6/9/2019 i think its a bit too early for them to get pregant considering future events I hope it ends well |
| MidnighAce chapter 56 . 6/7/2019 if it wasn't that anti female orb I would felt that you need after all and Gabriel |
| MidnighAce chapter 52 . 6/7/2019 hope you didn't forget about the room |
| MidnighAce chapter 11 . 6/3/2019 yeah no he should had some flame resistant armour on stand by even issei canon would've won with all the these advantage but awesome story still |
| MidnighAce chapter 6 . 6/3/2019 I do if you have to increase or decrease the harem but seerkvira has to bee in there with how much of a much otaku she is otherwise that's just wasted potential to drive everyone crazy |
| twisterblake2015 chapter 1 . 5/26/2019 good interesting |
| Thel310 chapter 1 . 4/19/2019 So his dislikes are basically the cliches of every mc |
| osmankoyun1 chapter 11 . 1/22/2019 if I was him I would nuke the building then deal with Riser you just wasted a good amount of potential but from the start this is a good novel thank you |
| SolarGlitch chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 Love Ur Story |
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/28/2018 You didn't need to make Roxas loose to maintain the narrative. Issie lost because he was an undiciplined and untrained child. You dumped all of Roxas's build up to just gave the wedding crasher scene. Tge best part about gaving an OP OC MC in a fan fic is the small narative changes stemming from the fact that you aren't dealing with an underdog. Also, Roxas seems to have the emotional maturity of a 13 year old. A 25 shouldn't look at a naked 17 year old and say 'I can't sleep with you because of my job.' he should say 'I can't sleep with you. You are much to young for me.' |
