So, I realise it has been a long time since I have read this story! I think the last chapter that I reviewed was chapter 11! I've been out of country for a while and I come back and the story is almost done, just the epilogue left?! I'm really glad you continued it though, even if I am a bit sad that I wasn't able to read them as they were posted.

Anyways, I really love where the story ended up going! I never imagined that there was a curse that made them attack their loved ones! And I was way off on thinking that Yuui was evil and trying to manipulate Fai. And I love all the cameos from Jashari(?) and how you tied those characters in with the ones from Clow. I can't believe that Kurogane was actually able to figure out his feelings somewhat when he went to bring back Fai, I mean, I thought he would have been way more oblivious and took forever. I'm glad he was okay though and that nothing too bad happened when Fai attacked him.

I can't believe that Yuui would send away Kurogane though just like that! I know he did it for Fai's sake but both of them were kinda upset about, Kurogane being mad that he couldn't stay to check on Fai and make sure everything went well and Fai because he thought for a short bit that Kurogane gave up on him. But still I'm glad everything turned out okay and they both understood why.

I'm soo glad too that Fai was able to stop the assassin and that Yuui wasn't hurt! And it may sound wrong but mostly I'm glad because that means less of a chance for things to be in between Kurogane and Fai getting together. Though Yuui is pretty impressive, managing to come up with the while ambassador thug so that his brother can be happy, I really like him for doing that.

And that brings me to... They finally got together! Semi officially but still! They even kissed, even if it kinda doesn't count... But I'm so glad that Sakura and Syaoran were able to be happy too and that everything so far has turned out okay. I really can't wait to read the next chapter and see how you decide to end the story! So please update soon, thanx so much! Bye!

great chapter, leaves me waiting on pins and needles for the next one on how they deal with the Kurogane's mom is going to teach Fai magic huh?. I know the two of them get along great, specially when they are teasing Kurogane. and will Fai be staying in Kurogane's homw or will he move to Fai's when this is all over?
Plus in your face council trying to keep Syaoran and Sakura apart

sorry too think there is only one more chapter I love this story.
please keep up the great writing

Good sixteen chapters

I am so happy for this chapter I am glad that Fai is back with Kurogane and Syaoron and Sakura are together too now Fai just needs to learn how to use his magic to help get rid of that cursed abject
I can't wait for your next chapter

thank you so much for this chapter it is awesome now pray tell what is in the letter Yui gave to Fai? and how are they going to get rid of the curse?
what Kurogane went home ? How is going to help Fai from there?
You fight scene was good keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter.

Sorry for the late review but my laptop is having issues and keeps crashing

Just one more episode? no way! even if you finish this story, I want more...:)

I enjoy how you wrote the story, everything seems to fit really well together. I especially like the cameo's, its as though this were a side-story for TRC. Maybe you should make the actual TRC characters visit this 'dimension' ;) ;) at the end, or as a one-shot. Now THAT would be interesting. I look forward to reading more from this fanfiction. :DD

This should be made into a manga, like a side story or something, it would be so cool!

Such a good story. I like that it's like Cinderella, but not so much so that I feel like I'm just looking at another Cinderella remake.

Don't worry! This chapter may not have featured Fai and Kurogane, but I enjoyed the chapter anyway. A good tale focuses on all elements of the story, not just the ones we want to see most. Besides, I love Syaoran, and Sakura, and everyone else.

thank you for the update, this was a nice interlude chapter. I like how Sakura and Syaoran are getting along now maybe the council will leave Syaoran alone and what was in the letter that Yuui sent?How is Kurogane going to help Fai now? And speaking of Fai why is he unconscious?
I can't wait for the next chapter

intresting chapter, diffently diffrent from the earlier chapters.

This is so sad! Noooo! Fai! Kurogane!

Update? Update soon? Please? Its not nice to leave off at such a dramatic part! Please?
I can't haaaaaaaandle it! I need to know what happens! Please please please?

this can't happen! Kurogane injured maybe mortally Fai will never forgive himself for hurting Kurogane.
this is one heck of a cliffhanger you can't end it here
please updated soon