Reviews for Little While Lies
gutsyGumshoe chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
This is so painful to read! Its good, but painful! Jim just kinda acts like MirrorKirk!
Baow chapter 10 . 11/8/2013
OMG! Finally! LOL. God, dense much. I mean really? Using the word platonic and making out enough to leave marks? Smh. Gosh, glad all that awkward is over, so they can move on to a whole other awkward. Ha.
TwoSpirit chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
This is quite literally the best thing ever.
I love you.
Shockolaa chapter 10 . 9/26/2013
I'm sorry because i'm only write one review for ten amazing chapter... Your fanfiction is...i don't know, it's wonderful! I began to read and i wasn't able to stop!

Thank you so much for your work!

PS: And sorry for my shitty english.
Melbi chapter 10 . 9/15/2013
Wow, what an amazing story!
x.keepingthemoon.x chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
This story is absolutely beautiful! Thank you for a great read :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I am rereading this did you go? Wqiting for dome more teqlly good, writing. Seriously i've read most of these are yours iapinch fluffy. But solid
Please try to eak out a few more chapter. Bring us some more of this tough and somewhat sweet and funny fic
Thanks
Nichalia chapter 10 . 8/30/2013
Wonderful! And this doesn't need an epilogue. It was lovely.
rinnia chapter 9 . 8/24/2013
I am really enjoying your story and I just love your stories in general but I'm not reviewing just because of that, but because I DO THE SAME THING WITH MY FACE WHEN I READ! I never thought I would find another person who copied the characters' faces as well...Thank you for making me feel a little less lonely:)
Keep writing, especially your K/S. I love Oblivious!Jim
I Love You chapter 10 . 8/11/2013
Can I just say this is literally one of the best fics I've ever read? Because I'm going to: This is literally one of the best fics I've ever read.
This is perfect. The ending was beautiful and this is, like, 100% how I picture Spock and Kirk's relationship. Kirk being straight but loving Spock anyways and their relationship being mostly platonic with kissing and cuddling. As an asexual person, it was so refreshing to read a fic like this. Just, the fact they aren't necessarily sexually attracted to each other in the conventional sense but that doesn't make their relationship and love for each other any less valid.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this! You have no idea how much I needed a fic like this right now.
Karkitty will eat you chapter 3 . 8/9/2013
I swear this is an honest question. Are you a freaking published author?! Your writing is magnificent!
Writerandstudent chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
XD
"Vulcans can wait a really long time for someone they think is worthy."
Image:
Jim dating someone else.
Spock: I am planning to kill you and do it so logically no one could track it back to me. Then I will have my JIm!
ProxC chapter 10 . 7/27/2013
*Lays down*
*Tries not to cry*
*Cries a lot*
That. Was. Perf. Ect.
Kotori-Sensei chapter 4 . 7/23/2013
01110000 01100101 01110010 01101101 01101001 01110011 01110011 01101001 01101111 01101110 0100000 01110100 01101111 0100000 01100011 01101111 01101101 01100101 0100000 01100001 01100010 01101111 01100001 01110010 01100100 -Permission to come aboard...
JAJAJJAJAJJAJAJAJJAJJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJJAJAJJAJAJA JJAA! XD That is GOLD!
Ok, this chapter...jijijiji...sorry, still laughing...:)
This chapter...wow, a lot of things (like in the previous ones). Well, about the reprimand, it was logical. It happens now, will happen in 10 years, and in 1000 years too...probably.
The letter from Jim's mom? Hilarious! so funny!
The video...T-T Poor Sam, but of course, poor Jim too. I understand him. There are times when you just WANT to be angry!
What else...XDXDXD the binary...still funny... :D
Kotori-Sensei chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
Jim T Kirk/Chris Pine in glasses.../
Spock/Zachary Quinto's ass...Triple /
;)
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