I like how you wrote Obi-wan and Ventress. Both are very in character.

I've started liking this pairing more as of late. And Ventress is one of my favorite characters.

Wonderful. I think you have Asajj dead on. Can't be a Jedi, but for her respect and care for Kenobi, she is no longer cruel just for the sake of it. I wish I could say more, but characterizations were perfect and I really felt that wistfulness,the bitterness of illusory autonomy, regret for lost chances and perhaps harsh words, and yet there's still a feeling that all isn't lost. I'm sure when Obi-Wan visits her after he's killed by his own Padawan, she'll have some choice words.

I just adore them as a couple. So many points of mutual understanding, if they could just have found the time and place to really grow a friendship. Great job. Favoriting.

This is good, really good.
It's a pity that there isn't more to it.

Very nice :-)

Very nice...I like this.

"She imagined him hunkered down somewhere, on the run, disheveled but still ludicrously handsome."

Oh yes, indeed...even Asajj isn't blind to his charms..is she

Absolutely incredible. Simply said, and without the usual fuss of eloquent jabs and fussed over emotions. Quick and to the point, I admire that writing style. And the theme... Ventress always was a favorite of mine, I so wanted to see her redeemed. Even if she was not, we all know that she had the doubt in her mind, and that is what counts, hmm?

Liked it, well written!

Excellent! I really liked the sense of their camaraderie - it happened in such odd circumstances, but was plausible. Also, you used 'started' correctly, and I am happy to see that.