wot? no 'then let lips do what hands do?'

hee hee. nice job. loved it. it's always nice to see friendship fics by people who are trying to be competent and succeed with flying colors.

Aw, I really enjoyed this.

Very good. I like! :)

Ugh, that's heart wrenching, just like those scenes were on the show. Gotta love these characters! You're doing them really well! Those were some pretty cripping scenes, not easy to watch - or read. I like your style.

This show literally broke my heart. I loved the interactions between Ellie and Alec and I'll miss them and the show! Loved the first chapter and Alec's inner monologue.

'ello. Just want to say thank you for this. You've made me to see the story in the smallest of the details, to witness the movements of their personalities, characters and feelings during the tragedy. I like this. Very much. the ending is good, just like it should be. Thank you.

PART FOUR! *reads*

Ohhhhh. *sniffles* So good.

*pokes* More, please? :beg:

Loved this one. Keep going!

This is great!
I really liked how you built off of the dialogue from the show in chapter 2, and showed Ellie's thoughts during the conversation.
Really well-written, and the characters are portrayed with excellent accuracy.
I hope you keep working on this, I'd like to read more!

Please keep writing!
I really like the idea of four parts looking at how hands are used - very clever.
You've got a great writing style, and you've captured the characters perfectly. Please keep going!

This is brilliant and you are awesome and I'd love moooooore. O.O Please? *pleading face*