Wow, I really love this this fic! It's excelently written, and the idea for it is awesome! I really wish more people wrote fics about this.

Doctor-whump, but wonderfully written! The pacing was good, and the ending really shocking, if a little OOC.

Alright, A, this is beautiful and I love you.
B, WHY THE FLYING FUCK IS THIS THE ONLY CYBER-DOCTOR FIC ON THE ENTIRE BLOODY SITE WHAT THE HELL DW FANDOM ALL THERE IS IS SHOTTY OC COMPANION STORIES!
...Sorry about making you listen to me rant. Just... why?
Anyways, awesome story.

:o oh my God, that was really good! :3 poor doctor... and Clara :s

Wonderfully dark story! It was very haunting, and I loved it! There's something about the ending, where the Doctor sacrifices Clara (and himself) that shows a different side to him. I imagine that's the sort of Doctor that destroyed Gallifrey, and it was very cool to see! I hope that makes sense.

I really liked this :D awesome!