Loved it! I wish there was more Misty/Brock out there. I'm so glad I found yours. Misty's bluntness was perfect and Brock was super well done. Misty's note at the end made me smile.

I don't normally like BrockxMisty stories, but this one's an exception. Continue please!

That was so cute and I loved it! Squeee!

I liked it, despite not being as much of a GymShipper

Aww! I wish this wasn't a oneshot- it's SO cute! It was a little bit confusing at the beginning because I thought the girl Brock was ogling at was supposed to be Misty, because she had red hair, too. But other than that, it's really great! You definitely captured the personalities of Brock and Misty VERY well!

That's the second story that I've read that the male stopped the drunken girl, who is clearly coming on to him, from doing anything she'd regret. (First was Hotel Hearts by Jomatto.) Oh, Brock. He made me laugh with his pick up line. It was wonderful. xD They were both perfectly in character, in my opinion. Good job. b('u'd) Wonderful one-shot. The right amount of fluffiness, and it went well with the songs playing while I read it. ;)
Great work and thank you for the read, bai. :D

*.Cheesecake-Chan

This was so sweet! I really think Brock is an under appreciated character in the fandom; he's been around, helping out for so long. The least we can do for him is at least let him get a girl in fanfiction. :P

That said, I think you characterized Brock perfectly. I've always wondered what was running through his mind as he looked at a girl, and what you wrote is spot on to my imagination. (By the way, I laughed so hard at his lame pick-up line! xD)

I also loved Misty. I think a lot of fics lately have toned down her personality a bit, and this was a refresher because she was completely bitchy like she was in the anime. Misty takes time to fall for a person, and she will be sassy and sarcastic, so I really liked how you wrote her and how she developed romantically in the fic.

The plot was great! :D While it was AU, it was very believable due to your flawless characterizations, and the whole situation with them toppling into the pool was funny and cute. (And Brock's cooking skills made a reappearance, it seemed.)

And the ending ajdfjakghd. That was /adorable/ and it seriously converted me to GymShipping for a split second, even though I have been and always will be a hardcore PokeShipper. Perfect! :D

Honestly, this fic was absolutely perfect and extremely well-written. Everybody's fics are just the same though, so I'm going to have to resort to nitpicking to choose between all the fics. (I feel really mean right now.)

[This was great, this was awesome, this was fucking fantastic, he thought.]

Since that's what he's thinking, it would have to be in present tense, even though the rest of the story is in past tense. You did that correctly with all the other thoughts, so I believe this is a typo. :)

Amazing job! I love this, honestly.

I don't really know what to say reppad since it's my first time reading a Brock and Misty fanfic but I can tell you for sure that it's great. I wish you the best of luck in the 3rd Challenge!

Hahahaha! Typical Brock to stare at girls!

I don't usually read Brock/Misty fics but I really liked this! It was a perfect moment between them, you could actually imagine it happening :D amazing!

Always refreshing to see some new GymShipping on here, even if it was a challenge! Great job on the story, you kept the characters true to form, and the story itself was quite cute :) Congrats!

That was such a lovely read! Really well done :)

That was so cute! :) You can't see me right now but I'm grinning stupidly while typing this. And everyone was perfectly in character, with Misty being bossy but sweet afterwards and Brock being his usual flirty self. The way Brock kept thinking again and again about how Misty was pretty made me laugh. And I'm so glad that Brock has finally found some love, the poor guy needed some. I only spotted a few errors :

[A smile spread across his tanned face, knowing he had just thought of the mostperfect pick up line ever.]- I think it's supposed to be 'most perfect'.

[Her pink lips, he could see them being slightly parted and how her tong wetted them. ]- You've spelt the word 'tongue' wrong.

[Brock didn't need to wait for her to come back to know that those doors were locked as well – seeing her wildly pulling at one and hearing her yelling something was prove enough.]- It should be 'proof enough'.

Anyways, thanks a lot for the great read. Good work :)

Beautiful Sensations.

...And finally Brock get's a girl, even though it's AU :P
I am not a fan of GymShipping but this one-shot was pretty good, you write these more often with other shippings :)

P.S - I hereby claim the credit to be the first reviewer LOL