Reviews for Kiss Me Slowly
Dark lord of Bunnies chapter 6 . 7/20/2015
B/A jarida for life
amazonefighter chapter 7 . 11/7/2013
so...
Jack is the leader?
I'm hoping it works
amazonefighter chapter 6 . 11/7/2013
B or A But Merida is better because she's a fighter
986Weapons689 chapter 7 . 8/21/2013
plot twist: they bump into Carter and Sadie Kane then with the heroes of olympus oh yes *sighs* if only the timeline would make sense (with this) and some of my fellow K.C fanatics were here oh welps i can dream... Aaanyway da not so formal review:
-was that a jackunzel reference? *eye turns Hulk green and twitches uncontrollably*
-i didnt really get that part where apophis came in...
-how did rapunzel and hiccup get to the spirits? am i forgetting something...
-itd be great if you gave those zephyrs a background story to make them fit better into the story
so yeah...keep writing! :D (said the author with three unfinished fanfics)
Coki-poki chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Please continue , i love this story
Destinyrawr chapter 7 . 6/15/2013
Can you try doing a lemon either way loving the story!
Chariana chapter 6 . 6/10/2013
Merida :) and GREAT as always
Leila chapter 6 . 6/8/2013
A! Defiitely A. Jack!
Guest chapter 6 . 6/8/2013
MERIDA NEEDS TO LEAD SRSLY OMfg
Rafael chapter 2 . 6/7/2013
Interesant history
Random chapter 6 . 6/7/2013
AAAAAAAAAA!
Please
Dede chapter 6 . 6/7/2013
I love the fact Robyn is in his head XD It makes it very interesting. Why was this chapter so short? T-T I think A. Jack should lead them because he is the one who obviously knows what's going on. I hope to see more jealousy, chaos, and some fluff (hint hint ;)) in the next few chapters! Don't leave us hanging for too long! 3
-Adieu!
Dede chapter 5 . 6/2/2013
Why the torture?! T-T we were getting along so well...anyways, I did like this chapter! The way you told the story reminded me of an action-packed movie XD Merida would take it that easily. Oh yeah, the guy I like is actually a winter spirit. Well, okay then ;D I wonder if Hiccup's going to be pissed if he sees Merida hurt? Probably...'
986Weapons689 chapter 5 . 6/4/2013
first reaction: OI HICCUP *kucks his stomach* NEWS FLASH: PRINCESSES ARENT STUPID (thatstgeprincesjob)
ok that felt good :) now the review:
-iwantastrid nvm
-hiccups alittle out of character here i dont think hed call people hot, play the im-better-than-you card and wheres his awkwardness
-slow down with the plot will ya
-try starting at where we ended
-explain why jacksa servant
-JARIDA IS BEAUTIFUL
-LOVE the wind spirits
-charactwr torture is my favorite past time n seeing that you like it too please write more :)))
boudicafireheart chapter 3 . 5/31/2013
Ah, Something Different. I love that song. :)
I didn't recognize the first one, but I might know it. Maybe.
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