Reviews for Kiss Me Slowly |
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Dark lord of Bunnies chapter 6 . 7/20/2015 B/A jarida for life |
amazonefighter chapter 7 . 11/7/2013 so... Jack is the leader? I'm hoping it works |
amazonefighter chapter 6 . 11/7/2013 B or A But Merida is better because she's a fighter |
986Weapons689 chapter 7 . 8/21/2013 plot twist: they bump into Carter and Sadie Kane then with the heroes of olympus oh yes *sighs* if only the timeline would make sense (with this) and some of my fellow K.C fanatics were here oh welps i can dream... Aaanyway da not so formal review: -was that a jackunzel reference? *eye turns Hulk green and twitches uncontrollably* -i didnt really get that part where apophis came in... -how did rapunzel and hiccup get to the spirits? am i forgetting something... -itd be great if you gave those zephyrs a background story to make them fit better into the story so yeah...keep writing! :D (said the author with three unfinished fanfics) |
Coki-poki chapter 1 . 8/9/2013 Please continue , i love this story |
Destinyrawr chapter 7 . 6/15/2013 Can you try doing a lemon either way loving the story! |
Chariana chapter 6 . 6/10/2013 Merida :) and GREAT as always |
Leila chapter 6 . 6/8/2013 A! Defiitely A. Jack! |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/8/2013 MERIDA NEEDS TO LEAD SRSLY OMfg |
Rafael chapter 2 . 6/7/2013 Interesant history |
Random chapter 6 . 6/7/2013 AAAAAAAAAA! Please |
Dede chapter 6 . 6/7/2013 I love the fact Robyn is in his head XD It makes it very interesting. Why was this chapter so short? T-T I think A. Jack should lead them because he is the one who obviously knows what's going on. I hope to see more jealousy, chaos, and some fluff (hint hint ;)) in the next few chapters! Don't leave us hanging for too long! 3 -Adieu! |
Dede chapter 5 . 6/2/2013 Why the torture?! T-T we were getting along so well...anyways, I did like this chapter! The way you told the story reminded me of an action-packed movie XD Merida would take it that easily. Oh yeah, the guy I like is actually a winter spirit. Well, okay then ;D I wonder if Hiccup's going to be pissed if he sees Merida hurt? Probably...' |
986Weapons689 chapter 5 . 6/4/2013 first reaction: OI HICCUP *kucks his stomach* NEWS FLASH: PRINCESSES ARENT STUPID (thatstgeprincesjob) ok that felt good :) now the review: -iwantastrid nvm -hiccups alittle out of character here i dont think hed call people hot, play the im-better-than-you card and wheres his awkwardness -slow down with the plot will ya -try starting at where we ended -explain why jacksa servant -JARIDA IS BEAUTIFUL -LOVE the wind spirits -charactwr torture is my favorite past time n seeing that you like it too please write more :))) |
boudicafireheart chapter 3 . 5/31/2013 Ah, Something Different. I love that song. :) I didn't recognize the first one, but I might know it. Maybe. |