I love it. Your an awesome author. You writing was very Addicting I count stop reading wanting to know what happened next.

what would happen is Kate met the other huntress

This was really really awsome. I loved it so much. Thank you for writting this wonderful piece

Great story!

I really loved this!

Hmm... I know the fic is completed. But there’s several things that doesn’t make sense.

The rogue hunters aim for humans associated with the pack. But the pack did not realise their humans are beyond Alison, Stiles and Lidia. Example: Scott’s Mother Melissa, Alison’s dad Chris and plus I would think Stiles would worry for getting his dad into trouble just by association too. This would make the situation more complicated and realistic.

The other is the Safeway shopping experience. A lady asking “who’s your friend?”, licking her lips and giving predatory leers usually meant a safe presumption that she’s checking him out. That Stiles went from picking up his veg to 180 scared and panicked is unwarranted. Issac came back quickly to his side and instead of “blending in” as per plan, simply growled and growled until she gets the point that he’s of puppy descent.

Perhaps the huntress did her homework and already knew he’s a target but for them to give it away just like that is kinda lame... sorry.

Overall the concept of the story is interesting so I’m still forging on.

So sweet I loved it.

#puppypile~ Love it~

Your fic is so awesome!
Thank you for this piece! I love it!

I read this chapter and thought;
"I really want tomatoes now"

God, that was awesome! And so much snuggling! ;)
Thank you so much for writting and posting this story!

That was brilliant c:
I love how you added Derek in werewolf form and Stiled interactions. They were soooo cute :3:3:3:3
Thank you for finishing the story

Nice story. I enjoyed reading it.

I'm laughing so much because I can imagine Erica saying "you wriggling shit" for some reason I can imagine it but OMG

Great ending to a great story! Thanks for writing!