I've seen enough. Bye!

Now this is getting wierd.

ouch. that's gotta hurt.

a Shadow? *Shudders* oh, and if the mane six are humans, I would suggest doing Equestria girls

Hey I just read chapter 4 and I think we should not have another scenario involving to people or ponies compete for one's attention. But it's a really good story!

OH MY GOD! NEW PAIRING! I have a suggestion. Maybe later in this story, Pitch could come back and kidnap Twilight because he knows Jack is in love with her.

So, I saw that this was the last chapter. Are you going to do another one?!
I WANT THEM TO KISS :D
it would be the best ever!
Omg, don't ever stop writing. You and I have the same writing style, so I can totally relate to this! please write more, you seem awesome.
-Dawnsearch

Wow, this is SO good! most of the fanfics have an asston of grammar problems, but you only had like one or two!
great story idea too! Are they going to be madly in love?
i'm the hugest fangirl right now :D

UUUUPPPPDDDDAAAATTTTEEEE PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE

AWESOME!Human Twi!

If I were you, I'd call this: Snowball Fight in the Workshop!

D'aww, this chapter is so kawaii but can you make it more serious in the following chapters, please?

I really enjoyed reading this hcapter though it's still a little random.

This chapter is a little confusing- what with Celestia not giving Jack a fair trial, but it'll probably be explained later on.

Wow, it's gotten really interesting- please keep updating and write more about the relationship between Jack and Twilight!