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Honestly this is great!

Please update this soon!

I feel bad for skipping on this before but I surely don't regret spending a whole day finishing this til the latest update! Wow. Love the dynamic between everyone, with the exception of Santana. Her sense of 'humor' by the snappy comments she kept throwing are just plain mean. I agree with the other reviewers commenting on Quinn's inability to lead a team properly if she'll let her people (exhibit a: Santana, exhibit b: Puck and exhibit c: Quinn herself too) disrespect each other to the point that it has become a habit. I can't even imagine how toxic it is to be part of their group even if it does work for them somehow. But they can still be a badass team without bullying Rachel or hell, Sam even. Glad to see that Quinn's finally going to try and fix that. Hopefully. Also, Ioving the slow burn here and that you're actually building trust and confidence between Faberry before romance bloom between them. Kinda excited to see how the possible love triangle will play out though.

All in all, plot's exciting and the characters are interesting. There are a few confusing points though like Beth's appearance for example: there are chapters where you described her to have blue eyes like Brody's then let her have brown eyes like her mum's the next. There's also a time where you mentioned her being brunette then the last few chapters described her being a dirty blonde, which makes it more confusing since both her parents are brunettes. Unless y'know, she got the recessive gene.

Looking forward to what you have in store for us next! Hoping for more Rachel kicking criminal butts or laying one down on smug Santana! Or Tina.

I'm glad Quinn has finally realised that she's behaving rather poorly. She's not being a very good team leader by not only allowing the others to treat Rachel badly, but by also doing so herself. They work a dangerous job, and she's been passively encouraging the teams behaviour, making a weak team, which they can't afford in their line of work. For many chapters now Quinn has been a terrible leader, I hope this will be a turning point for her. This doesn't even have anything do with me wanting faberry, it's just me wanting Quinn to grow up and put her big girl pants on and do her job properly.

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU FOR THIS! I have missed this story so much and you certainly didn't disappoint. The PO Smith intrigue is freaking AWESOME! I must say I'm a bit tired of Tina and Santana's attitude and I hope Rachel eventually tears them BOTH a new one and let them know she belongs! Anyway I can't wait for your next update and the adorableness that is Beth! One minor note is that you called Rachel's mom SHELLY several times instead of SHELBY.

It’s grrat to see a chapter and your worth the wait

Was so happy to see this update I can’t wait for more

I was so glad when I saw mail-message about update. And so sad now.
But good luck to you! I'll wait forever)))

Thanks for the update and I agree with your feeling on Puck. I never liked him in the original Glee because as far as I was concerned he was a date rapist getting Quinn drunk and he generally was a sexist pig and objectified females. maybe you could switch his character with Brody! I always thought Brody and Rachel had great chemistry and the writers turned Brody into a douche when it looked like that relationship could be a threat to Finchel! Puck being Jewish would fit into the narrative of his being a Mossad agent and since Brody really wasn't a long term character on the show you could write him any which way, or even Matt since he was only on for a season or two. Can't wait to see what you com up with next

THANK YOU! As usual you had me on the edge of my seat, in tears, and pissed off. BRAVA! I love the attention to detail and how you make the characters so multi-dimensional. I really am interested in seeing the dynamic between Hiram/Leroy/Rachel and I hope you will explore that. What made Hiram seemingly turn into such an ass? How did Shelby fit and what did Leroy perhaps leave out when talking to Rachel? How will Hiram react when/if he finds out RACHEL killed Brody? Thanks again for not giving up on this JEWEL!

Thanks for the update