I absolutely adored this story. Ventrobi doesn’t get enough attention, and you were able to write their relationship perfectly!

Good story, if a little fluffy for my taste. Shame it is incomplete.

Great stuff. Please update this story.

Great stuff!

Very nicely written. I hope that you continue with this fic as I am curious where it would lead.

This is by far the best love story I've read about obiwan. He has always repressed and denied himself for the greater good. So to match him with Asaji, who in my opinion is his equal in that regard, is brilliant, and the way they came together wasn't rushed or unbelievable. Your story is nothing but a 10 out of 10. Just wished you'd finished it. Lol
I'm curious if she would make obiwan realize Anakins darkness or if she'd bring him out of his darkness on tatooine after he beats Anakin.

Good story so far. Keep up the good work! :)

That was very enjoyable to read. I know you intended it to be longer and never actually finished it, but this ending makes perfect sense. Of course, I don't think anyone will complain if you decide to write a sequel someday :)

You made this offer not only plausible, but completely logical. I don't think Yoda is OOC at all, that's exactly how he could have dealt with the situation if things happened the way they did in this story !

Anakin being "smugly proud of the older man" stole the highlight of this chapter ! Dat cliffhanger tho...

FINALLY ! Obi Wan putting the Force to good use ! I've always wondered why it wasn't more frequent in Star Wars related fanfiction. I know I couldn't help but use telekinesis in devious ways...

I've truly enjoyed your story! Thanks for a wonderful read.

Oh, idk, Yoda's made some calls I questioned, so who knows? It could've happened! ;)

What a powerful chapter.

Love Yoda, I do. Sorry couldn't help it lol.