come on, what kind of cliffhanger is that. could you make a sequel pls.

Nice. These two need more fiction about them.

"Violet x Mirage" mind blown!
I could see how this could spawn other works, i am one for character development myself, but worth the read before bed.

Please continue to write for this ship, there isn't enough interest in it

NOOOOOOO! You MUST continue! That was absolutely fantastic. It had such a great plot line, there was a perfect balance between the sex and the actual story (though I wouldn't mind more of the sex ;), and your writing (which had no grammatical or spelling errors that I could see) completely amazed me. Keep up the great work and UPDATE!

oh please, oh please continue I love reading femslash. Violet and Mirage forever!

Two Marvel references...hmm...I'm gonna guess and say the exercise with the remote is reminiscent of Jean Grey's telekinesis training and the "Super Happy Monster Show" is a reference to the Super Hero Squad Show. Am I right? Am I wrong?

wow...sweet yet erotic

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story; I enjoyed every word I read.

It is such a shame there are only very few stories from this pairing. Any chance on adding more to the list?

What a beautiful love they share! Surely even the gods must envy them.

I agree with you. There isn't NEARLY enough Virage on FFN. I contributed one short piece ("Conundrum") but my Muse, sadly, hasn't laid any more on me. Yet.

This is a great story on a few levels. Seeing Vi getting better and better with her force fields (seriously? manipulation fine enough to take apart and reassemble an electronic device? mondo impressive!) is a subject near and dear to my heart. I think she has potential to be one of the most powerful supers on the planet. Certainly one of the most dangerous.

Maximal kudos to you! This gets Favorited.

this is one of those rare stories. One that is both well written and not Over done with just sex. Dont get me wrong its hot! Very hot!. Your work is amazing please continue to write I would love to read more. You are a great writer.