Reviews for Broken Promise |
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MiuraWtr chapter 2 . 4/7 it's nice and such a relieve. I love the story. But some worda kinda ... wrong in spelling and it will be better if you add a punctuation in the end of the dialog |
Maddy chapter 1 . 10/4/2019 I dont need to cut you some slack, because it's already amazing! If you didn't tell me, I would of thought you were a master at writing FMA fanfictions. |
user needs a username chapter 1 . 9/3/2019 Aw so cute! I did see some mistakes but other than that it's really good. |
Betenowaru chapter 2 . 6/3/2019 It was half crappy half awesome |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2017 Gaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh! I haaaaate cliff hangers with a burning passion! Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck! |
sugarthegoat82 chapter 2 . 10/30/2016 That's was sooo beautiful. I almost cried but I didn't want to randomly cry in front of my family so yeah. Love the story! Keep up the good work |
YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 2 . 1/10/2016 Wow, I thought you were exaggerating when you said you didn't care how this turned out. I can blatantly tell from reading this... I'm sorry I did really. It was a good idea but obviously poorly executed! |
f.tastarossa chapter 2 . 5/10/2014 Gotta make this fav story! XD |
Blackwind137 chapter 2 . 12/4/2013 This story line was awesome! I would like to say, however, your structure was very hard to follow... Many comma splices (as I believe they're called..). Despite that though, good story! |
Johanni93 chapter 2 . 11/9/2013 Aww, I'm so glad it turned out to be a happy ending! It doesn't suck at all! Thanks for sharing this great fic with us :D |
Aquiescence chapter 1 . 9/26/2013 The reason for writing is to ACCENTUATE beginnings. It would draw it out, create suspense. :/ all in all, this sucked, EVEN for a first time. |
snakebuttt chapter 1 . 7/18/2013 Uhh, this looks a LOT like another story called Shadow Of A Doubt by Bookwrm389, albeit less well-written. I hope you didn't steal the idea :/ (and you better not even try the whole they copied me" when their story was posted 3 years before yours) |
Victorious-Mind chapter 2 . 6/25/2013 Very cute! |
Dragon the Antihero chapter 2 . 6/18/2013 I liked the story is was well writen and overall enjoyable. Good job! :D |
Cartoon Cow chapter 2 . 6/18/2013 This is a good idea, but there are a lot of grammar mistakes its something beta reader could really help with, i would be willing to do it but i wont be near a computer the next 10 days. |