Stunningly beautiful story, the kind that makes me wish I had discovered TM in time to read it when it first came out. It'll stay with me a long time.

“In that moment he sees everything they are and everything they could be laid out in front of him.” How beautiful. Your writing is... lovely. Thank you.

So sweet thanks for the very nice read

"Is it magic tea that tells me how to fix everything?" - "It's chamomile."

Holy crap. I spy a Lizzie Bennet Diaries reference and it is lovely. xD

But really, this whole thing is lovely. Both when they're okay and when they're not, there's something fascinating about these two and their interactions and you captured that really well here.

I missed this when it was originally posted. It's a truly wonderful, moving piece; absolutely worthy of its status as your anniversary fic. Thank you and belated congratulations!

Happy anniversary! I really enjoyed this fic. Hope to see more from you soon!

This is so...beautiful. So...intense! I have no words.
Thank you for this wonderfully electrifying little piece of Jisbon!

Snow :)

Beautiful.

A gorgeously elegant piece of writing. I liked the subtleness, the hints of emotions underneath the calmness, Jane's need and desperation for her and at the same time his need to stay away from her. It had a very nice flow to it and they were perfectly in character which is always nice. The lovely touch of banter and humour in the end was just icing on the cake.

Beautiful! I'm very happy to read you again!

WOOOOOW nice..

omg *-*

Beautifully subtle in execution. Be proud of this piece.

That was great, I loved it!

I totally adore this story. It's perfect and so very much them!