Reviews for Unintentional Father |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this wish there was more. |
![]() ![]() Just loved it! Your dialogue sounded just like Miles and Charlie! I've always loved their relationship!Please keep writing, you have a special gift for it! |
![]() ![]() crying,so beautiful story! love that she cries for miles when shes of and scared, shoves hiw much she trust him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahahahaah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable! I really loved this story! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I offically love this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how Nora takes Jasons side and poor Charlie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is the best day ever THIS IS EXCTLY tge fic I was waiting for a little jarlie with a hint over protective miles about jarlie perfection |
![]() ![]() I like it. Its really good. And I laugh at the over protective Miles. Keep going :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked Aaron's line: "Will you two use actual words, the rest of the class doesn't speak Matheson." |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o Oh my god! This is SUCH a great story! I LOVE it! I love the connection that Charlie & Miles have. |
![]() ![]() I love stories between Miles and Charlie. This one is so far my favourite. Continue! |
![]() ![]() I like this (: Charlie/miles have such an interesting dynamic...I really would love for the show to expand a little more upon it :P great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE! Please keep going! I wonder if Miles is really Charlie's dad? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Charlie being sick and Miles is there for her! You nailed the Father/Daughter relationship between the two! My favorite part: Charlie: "Dad says to keep up the good and to welcome to the club." Miles: "What club kid?" Charlie: "The dads of pain in the ass daughter's club." Great job and I hope you continue! |