Ahhh the fluff is everythign to me. I hope you update this, thank you for writing!

This is one of my favorite scenes like, in the entire Kilo-5 trilogy. It really shows how demented Halsey can be. When she thinks Naomi is John and just like, the emotion she feels, the stiffness when Vaz and Mal arrest her...the whole thing is just SO fucking intense. Awesome to see it from Vaz's POV.

This is everything. I ship them so fucking hard and I am so excited to keep reading this. You deserve all of the reviews ever.

I'm so glad I found this, since I love it to bits. Hope you do more Vaz/Naomi stuff, especially since Mortal Dictata is now out, because you do an awesome job of writing these two.

If you would like, I can give you some Vaz/Naomi moments in Mortal Didacta, the third book that came out this January :P

I loved this. I wish there were more fics about these two.

Aww. Yeah, I've fallen in love with Vaz/Naomi too. He's such an interesting guy...
Liking these more personal, so to speak, glimpses into their lives. Interesting. And yeah, looking forward to Traviss' next Halo book too. Hoping Vaz and Naomi will actually become a pair or something. Traviss has done it before, after all, in her Republic Commando books. And if not... well, there's always fanfiction.

AHHH this is fantastic! I love the vaz/naomi pairing and this is the first fic I've seen for it and it's AMAZING you write REALLY well and this is super interesting please continue this story and keep writing you're great :)