Reviews for Crimson Snow |
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Serelena chapter 7 . 11/10/2016 Thank you so much for writing this story! Even if it is never updated I absolutely adored the way you perfectly captured Zen and Shirayuki's thoughts! Best Akagami no Shirayukihime story I've read so far! |
Angelica463 chapter 2 . 11/26/2015 On Chapter 2, and so far I'm loving it! You are doing a great job of explaining things that left me confused in the show. |
saraj8ne chapter 5 . 9/3/2015 Though I'm only on chapter 5, I have been enjoying this fanfiction immensely! You have a very neat way of (re)writing this story, it's really fun! :D Also, I think the little tid-bits that you add on at the end, or your side-notes I guess (lol), are super kind and really cool! I can tell that you really cherish your friends! They're very lucky! :) Thank you very much for being so wonderful and for writing this fanfic! () Please keep up the good work~! -Sara |
Ethereal Foxx chapter 7 . 1/31/2015 I love this! It follows the general plot,but you've expanded on some of the ideas and we get to see more into each characters' thoughts. Wonderful writing! |
Harihi chapter 7 . 5/21/2014 You are not doing this fiction anymore? |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/20/2013 well, in chapter 2, there's something that doesnt make sense: Zen heard a woman's voice, and it looked like she was alone. Why would she be talking if she is alone? |
ToTrulyBe chapter 7 . 6/15/2013 I think this idea is really cute! I usually don't care much for 'retelling' fics, but you are doing it in a really cool way that gives more insight into a possibility of the characters' thoughts :) Please continue! I love reading new ANS fics, considering there are so few of them :) |
Xoko chapter 1 . 5/25/2013 It's brilliant! can't wait for more! |
Skittles chapter 4 . 5/6/2013 You've done a really good job portraying the story through the eyes of Zen and Shirayuki! I can't wait to read more! |
Edhla chapter 4 . 5/5/2013 "Hands flying up to..." for some reason, the site broke your sentence. It's done it to me before. That analogy of hated vegetables to poison was a killer (pun not intended.) Very clever writing x |
Edhla chapter 3 . 5/5/2013 Really love Shirayuke in this chapter, and the continuing motif of the red hair. You've fleshed out Zen really well, too (though I can't compare him to canon because I'm blind in that respect :) ) Only one thing that jumped out at me: "His eyes were filled with a small bit of curiosity, and she bit her lip gently, trying to think of a legitimate reason." "Filled" seems to belie "small", so I'd pick one or the other and run with it :) The biting of her lip seems to be a bit of a fanfic cliché, but that's completely subjective so I wouldn't say it's bad or wrong or that you shouldn't keep it- just thought I'd point it out :) Great stuff. |
Edhla chapter 2 . 5/5/2013 Another excellent chapter. The only thing I have for concrit is that "conveniently..." well, comes across as a little bit *too* convenient, perhaps? That whole section could easily be expanded for more detail, which might suspend disbelief a little better. Otherwise, excellent work x |
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/5/2013 I'm not familiar with the fandom, but this is a stylish and beautifully written fic. I particularly love the rhythm of your prose. Outstanding work x |
Natalie Field chapter 4 . 5/4/2013 Just too lazy to log in properly. I love, love, love this manga, and I really like how you are interpreting it. _ Very good. Can't wait for more! |