Reviews for The Puppet Master of Eden |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I'm sweating I also thought it was sweet in a way |
![]() ![]() My favorite line : "The man was sex dipped in sin, temptation, and every deadly device wrapped into one glitter-coated package of perfection." 10/10 Thanks for this |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck this is sooooo hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fan fic. It is so awesome and steamy |
![]() ![]() Wow! I simply have no words. I was searching for a fic like that for ages. It is absolutely wonderful, brilliant, exactly what I love. The best 'Labyrinth' thing I have ever read. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I wish there were more stories like this... I cannot even describe how good that is! Wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this was written quite a while ago, so I hope you get to this read this! I think this is the best sarah/jareth smut I've read. It had everything I love in a good smut fanfic, well written, in character, long and bsdm! Do you think you could ever get around to doing a oneshot about this length about the caning you mentioned? Hope you update soon, you're talented! |
![]() ![]() Jesus fucking Christ that was one of the best Jareth x Sarah one shots I have ever read! This is exactly how I like my smut... Brrr gosh I'm off to have a VERY cold shower! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I like the possessive, dark Jareth. I think I might like punishment like that considering the reward. :) Thanks for sharing. xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually Eve fell because of a snake in the grass, and while this is fun, it sounds like you just got done reading 50 Shades of Grey beforehand and decided to try the same tricks. Although turning the metal balls to crystals was a nice touch. R |
![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I really needed this story, loved kt! Gonna give you an A |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! I liked this very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like someone has read fifty shades of grey a little too much...but good none the less |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! This is almost as precious as Sarah is! |