Reviews for Konoha's Swordsman
Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2017
The moment you have to downplay another character to show Naruto in a better light is when you fail as an author.
tjb123456 chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
theres someone stealing your story.
redwolf23456 chapter 5 . 7/31/2014
Great story so far
Jose19 chapter 5 . 6/7/2014
I am really sorry for that but have you added Virus protections programs for you computer because I usually set mines to their highest levels, and now you have to be very careful because recently if you upload pictures or receive Emails you have to check them carefully because there is a new Adware virus that is so aggressive that they can hack your computer, and there is a huge hacking problem with big companies because these hackers are using these viruses.
Gamelover41592 chapter 5 . 6/7/2014
let me know who adopts this
the unregistered wolf animagus chapter 4 . 4/24/2014
oooh nice can't wait for the next bits
mr grimjaw chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
this is good
CW chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
In this day and age...don't you know to use protection?
D00rFr4m3 chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
Well, as an idea, try to do a system restore? If you aren't sure how, google it. Try it in safe mode if it doesn't work normally.
Also, what game was it so I can stay far far away from it?
Agrond chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
And an third good story, I'm starting to understand why you have this poll in your profile.
I hope it won't be to hard for Naruto to train his kenjutsu during the Wave Mission. Plus I like stories where Haku survives and goes to Konoha.
AnAddictedReader chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Man, I always laugh at people who get guilt tripped. It's amusing to see them get taken advantage of.
LuxEterna1 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
not bad just a few things
ryo are equivalent to yen and a 100 yen discount is nothing (about one dollar) besides why should a smith give a substantial discount just cause someone wants to haggle afterall he is still running a buisness so you should find a better reason if you want to have him give a substanital discount
next improve your weaponlore if you want to write about them
first of the tanto is a dagger style blade (with a more or less straight blade unlike the usual japanese swords) next the tachi is a type of the katana so it wouldnt have been mentioned extra
given what you described you probably meant a wakizashi or kodachi
otherwise a fine story so far
Silver Heart11DOOM chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
love it more plz
Soccer27 chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
Update already!
Status INFLICTED chapter 4 . 7/11/2013
this story is awesome, nice plot and everything, and the pic is awesome honestly I only read the fic because of the and naruto pairing but this is brilliant update soon
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