You say it's done, but left it at a cliffhanger... XD

I love it, amd look forward to seeing more when you have time and energy for it! Sorry, I usually write better reviews than this, I'm just a little scrambled right now.

You are an AMAZING writer! It's really hard to make me cry. I watch videos titled "Will 100% make you cry!" and in the end I'm sitting here like, "Oh. wow. they all died. Is that it?". When my grandma's dog died (i really loved that dog BTW) and my mom broke the news, she started sniffling and I was like "Oh! He died?... Oh OK then...What for lunch?" Like seriously it is really hard to make me cry. But when I was reading this I actually started crying. I mean like, i have read fanfics in which a character died and I was fine, so I was surprised when the tears started falling. And this fanfic was really funny. I used to hate pitch but now I'm like "WOOH, Pitch with that sass ThO!"

~Just Another Face in the Crowd
"It doesn't matter how many times you fall, you
must always give up."

You're not going to write the second spology or the end conclusion with the other guardians? What about Sandy? What would he try and do with Jack to make things better?

Lovely job!

fudge you bunny -.-

untill he tried to apologize though

I love this book so much, good work!

I have another plot bunny for you! What if bunny beat the crap out of Jack like in this story except he did it after the blizzard or 68. And then when the guardians kidnap Jack to recruit him as a guardian he freaks out and is petrified of bunny. The other guardians then find out why and have to help Jack recover and bunny feels bad. Make Jack have a good reason for the blizzard, not I was bored. It could be he had a nightmare, he was in a fight and lost control, his staff cracked, or something else not his fault.

You're a good writer so I decided I can trust you with my plot bunny. You remember the scene where pitch throws Jack in the chasm after snapping his staff right? What do you think would happen if he hadn't thrown the broken staff down there with Jack? Jack wouldnt be able to fix his staff so he wouldnt have been able to escape. Jack could try and climb out but even if he makes it out he cant fly away from Antarctica. What if he threw Jack down there alone and without his teeth or memories? What if another spirit, one who can take the cold, that isn't on pitchs side or the guardians side found Jack after he was stuck there for a century or so? This story can go a couple different ways at this point, the spirit could find jacks staff and give it back, see it but not know it was important, break it more or just never find it. He can be nice and help Jack and become his new family, he can be stoic and gruff and make Jack neutral, or he can be crazy and abusive and stuff. If you go with that last one you could make pitch feel guilty for leaving Jack stranded when he finds out what happened and you could make bunny guilty for making Jack leave in the first place. If the stranger is abusive please make him whip jack atleast once. I know that sounds terrible and if it was real I would never want that to happen to anybody but I have a thing where I like hearing about major recoveries and fear and stuff and a whipping is the most traumatic for me... or branding... I don't know:/ my sadistic side scares me but the greater the pain the greater the guilt and the grief of the guardians and pitch. I liked it in your story when Jack was still terrified of bunny even after the apology. Just an idea

I loved it but I wished it was longer but I still loved it!

Love it ! so much!

Love it !

NICE I LOVE THIS STORY!
kind of gives pich a cool added personality trait
way 2 go

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Loved all the chapters!

Poor lil Jack