Wow. Well done. Go Gibbs!

Great story

Wow I think this writer really has it out for Ziva.

Loved this bout time someone saw she is a bitch.

Tony and kate had banter but also were there for each other and worried about each other alot.

Ziva on the other hand only cared about herself and constantly put others down and acted like she was better then them she was a bitch and tony got screwed over with his so called send off even tho it was all about her not him at all

I really enjoy your take on the fandom. Great job.

Loved this! Wish it had happened this way!

This is the way Ziva ought to have left the show! It's a pity TV-Gibbs never got his head out of hiss bytt.

Gibbs is the best. Flat out. But even the best need someone. Ziva didn't realize that 'someone' is Tony. I love stories like these because it really brings to front Tony and Gibbs' father/son relationship. I really wish we'd seen more of that in the show, and less of Tony and Senior bonding. It just doesn't make sense! I mean, the guy abandoned him when he was 12. Then proceded to ignore him for the next 25 years. And then, all of a sudden, BAM! Senior shows up and everyone's okay with that?! But I digress.

This story really showed that Gibbs would do anything for Tony. And Ziva really shouldn't have tried to make him choose. That's not how that works. I can't wait to read more of your works, as I'm sure they'll be just as splindid, if not more so.
Ttyl,
Darth Becky 726

Finally! Go Gibbs, it's about time.

Ultimate 'oh, snap!'

Good story.

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Yowza.

Great story! I didn't like that comment either. Just went too far.

I liked it a lot when Ziva and Kate leave the show. I think the two characters were abusive, rude arrogant emuito. Ziva always ridiculed Tony and Tim on the show, threatening the two with their Mossad skills and fleeing their tasks with intimidation.