Reviews for Lost In Translation
Bbholbert3 chapter 1 . 10/19/2019
Wow... amazing
87WW chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
Meant: i think you do a great job writing one for their wedding night!
87WW chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
Recently started bing watching seasons of NCIS and i also started reading Tiva fanfiction. Tiva is on of the greatest pairings.
Great job on this story! I bet you would a freat job if you wrote one of their wedding night!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2018
When is sequel coming to this outstanding story?
Love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2018
Enjoying the read, but I want more of what happened beyond the last chapter— more story please and thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
O...M...G...!
FANTORGASMIC STORY ! WOW !
Allie chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
WOW...WOW. Really great story... really great writing. I don't usually like too much smut but you made Tony loving, heartwarming, thoughtful, caring, considerate, trustworthy. I hate when they make Tony (who is so damn handsome and smart) act like an idiot on the show, because I actually think in RL he is exactly as you have portrayed him.

Hope you still read your reviews because I just found this story now. Will look for the proposal.
DeathDagger chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
Omg! I think I found my new favorite story! Tell me you're doing a sequel where he pops the question? Please! Dammit I'm probably gonna read this once a day. I love their characters! I love it!
Buffalogirl chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
AWESOME, FANTASTIC, INCREDIBLY WELL WRITTEN, PLS. KEEP IT COMING..IT'S THE BEST TIVA STORY IV'E EVER READ. MORE POWER TO YOU, NCIS SHOULD HIRE YOU AS WRITER! THANKS A MILLION...
ncismcabbyfan101 chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
The name of your story is now a NCIS episode!
Annie chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
Hi!
This is an awesome story, but would you mind maybe adding a trigger warning of some kind? I can only speak for myself here, but I had a really hard time with the scene where Ziva describes her rape(s). That said, you are a very talented writer. I can't wait to explore your other work!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
My favourite tiva story ever 3 xx
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Damn it human! I wanted to see him fucking propose but IT IS A BRILLIANT STORY I #LOVEDIT!

Kind Regards
Beth Clark
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
This wasnt my favorite. Youve done better work. Gibbs setup was classic and wonderful and the lingere shopping and private time in Paris was great but I didnt get the same emotion from the characters I have in other stories from you. Tony I dont think would have rough sex at least the first time without ensuring Ziva knew his heart. I expected that convo before he went further. The turn of events from heated anger to casual flirting in the new hotel bathroom was a total 360 and I missed some sort of conversation or at least Z's pov. The convo where Z admits details no one knew from her capture...and yet Tony was still willing to do the fanny cookie dance without protection surprised me...one or the other ...you should empasize the need for seperate time to keep it safe...just saying...

That story ...you are not alone...at lo levad...the bar was set so high and I want all my Tiva smut to be at that incredible level with some plot thrown in there. That continues to be my number one favorite as I explore this fan-dom.

Your talent is amazing and I hope you take my comments as constructive and not critical. You have accomplished to share a great talent no matter my opinion. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Wow, really, really good.
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