Amazing, PLS continue!

*Winces* ouch. And I thought the (literal) cat fights I saw (and had) as a kid were bad. But I am pretty sure gettin' my shell handed to me by a cat is easier to take then two fightin' brothers. (I wouldn't know, I have no siblings (unless animals count)).

As for that strange feelin', Donny-boy, that is most likely your 'protective-big-brother-take-care-of-little-brother' instincts comin' into play. *shakes head sadly* I feel sorry for poor Leo and Raph when you finally snap. They are goin' to be gettin' their shells handed to them BIG time. If there is one thing I learned from bein' surrounded by animals my whole life is this: do NOT mess with the pack. Same goes for siblings, I believe. More so for the younger ones. Don't mess with them, it ends badly.

Even if they must be protected from the family itself. Which means... GO DONNY! Give them shell!

What? Mikey and Donny are my favorites! I don't like it when they are upset! Their closeness is just adorable! *sigh of content*

Anyway, I am not going to force you to continue this story. Though, seeing as it doesn't say 'completed' at the top, I assume you have plans for it. I hope you didn't lose them! (I hate it when that happens...)

Keep up the good work, my friend!

Poor Donny and Mikey! *hugs them tight*

I'm really intrigued by this one though, hope you come back and finish it someday! You're really good!

Amazing story so far! :) please update soon.

Unique angle. This is the first fanfic I've read that mainly focuses on the emotions of Don and Mikey while Leo and Raph are fighting.

Awww!

I love this! Are you going to continue it?
(Sorry if I bother you :) )

Hm... you should continue this. And elaborate on how Leo almost let Donnie drown. Yes.

please please please write more! this is soooo cute!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! I am begging you to please continue it! I'll be your best friend!

Please continue with this. I love this story so much and i can see a lot of guilt in Raph and Leo's futures. When are you gonna continue?

Please, please, please, please continue! I want to see how this escalates and poor MIKEY! Wah! I love this story! Please continue! Wait, I just said that. Well, then you better do it!

... Mikey or Donnie are gonna die or get severely injured, aren't they?

WRITE ME MORE (please)!

aww! pore mikey! don be the best big brother ad take mikey with you! you can rise him all on your own! you'll be his brother/mother/father!