Cute good natsu!

Ooh, loved itttt :D

So, I haven't gotten to this arc yet but I read this anyway. Not sure what's going on but I get the picture and the point. NaLu! I gotta day, Natsu can be pretty dense but his heart seems to never fail him or his friends. Super sweet!

Not disappointing at all! Thanks

This is great, and definitely one of the better NaLu fics I have ever seen, if not one of the best. I really love how you got Natsu to be so in character, which is really REALLY hard.

This is a really, nice sweet fanfic. :) It IS hard to write about Natsu and Lucy's relationship since Natsu is such a ignorant but lovable fool. :P

XD omigosh my feels.
Now I really do freaking love you.
I hope you continue to write fairy tail fanfiction. :))

I will go down with the NaLu ship

Neh that is just Natsu and Lucy right there. You are an amazing writer! I love all of your works! Keep updating! *thumbs up*

The water fight is one I remembered clearly. Fairy Tail does that to you. All these eventful and emotional stuff gets carved into your mind. I love how Natsu has always been so tuned to Lucy and ran to her rescue the few times during the tournament. To me you are right on the money with Natsu's reactions and responses. It's definitely another great read for me. I agree with the rest here, more Nalu please! XD

Pffft, Scarlett-san never disappoints!
Yay! More Fairy Tail! And NaLu! :D

:D

I loved reading this. I agree with you, it's actually kind of scaring thinking about the way Natsu's mind works, but I think you got him very in character. This was really sweet, and I love this couple, so you have made me smile on an otherwise dreary day.

GAH! I didn't know you were into the Fairy Tail fandom! This just makes me want to shower you with GODLY PRAISE! ;U;

Anyways, this is your first NaLu fic right? I ABSOLUTELY SHIP THESE TWO AS HARD AS SOMA asdFGHJKSDF.
Okay, enough with my useless cries! WHEW.

For a first timer at writing a NaLu fanfic (and yes, I /completely/ agree, Natsu's a hard person to keep in character in a fanfic without making him a bit OOC) , you have him SPOT ON as a character! His loyalty and admiration and (should I say) *love* for Lucy is written so perfectly well here! Have you read the recent chapters of Fairy Tail lately? I think Natsu's feelings towards Lucy on those chapters should give you enough of a base to write about for future stories! KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK! 3

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Nice oneshot I believe you did a good job and everyone was in character.