Great story! :)

Thank you for writing this story. Kingkiller Chronicle needs more fanfiction and though you probably don't need it, I give you my praise.
I enjoyed this very much. The characters' personalities and dialogues were fantastic. The simple -and great- idea behind it was perfectly played.
You have my gratittude and admiration; not to speak of talent.
Greetings!

I adore Tempi! Nice two-shot you have here :)

Hello. I love the story, please continue. Tempi speaks a bit too many words and (in my opinion) not enough gestures. You could try to add some in italics, like in the books. And the use of "Reshi" in narration is a little strange , since it was presented as Bast's pet name for Kvothe. I'm a perfectionist, so don't take the criticism too hard. Do continue.

This is great! I'm in awe of your writing capabilities. I love haw Tempi matured, and Bast's fighting style is exactly how I would've pictured it too. Thanks.

Loved it. Really, truly loved it. It's hard enough finding a good fic, but to find a good Kingkiller fic, well, that's asking for a lot. Congratulations, you made my evening. You gave me hope that Reshi will come back.

That was brilliantly done. I loved it. Thanks for posting a story deserving of a good review on this website.

Very nicely written. It seems like it was written by Rothfuss himself. Seriously, really great job!

I wish more people would show up to literally knock some sense into Kvothe!

Yay! Someone else who ships Kvothe/Tempi!

This fic is awesomeness. Tempi is perfect, all zen and not at the same time. Kvothe just needs the reminder.

Great story! I know it says complete, but please please PLEASE think about adding more!

Absolutely loved it! You portrayed Tempi perfectly!

This was very interesting. . . Though I felt that Kvothe should have pretended that he was a innkeeper for a bit longer, and Bast should've kept the secret too, but dropping the hint from time to time. Anyway, nice fic. Hope to see more TKKC fics posted in the future.